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[esther_91]

Title: Dealing With Pompey
Rating: PG
Pairing: Ole/Paul

Paul liked to keep his personal thoughts to himself, to keep them out of the public.

Whenever you thought, mused about it, you felt reminded of Norway.

In quiet mystery, the wide lansdscape of your homecountry lay before unknowing visitors, who would shake their heads at how rough and cold and

Comments

[kobean]

LMAO. THE LAST LINE KILLED ME. oh paul. ♥
gorgeous, love. but then, everything you write is. :)

[esther_91]

:DDDD and here i was, biting my nails off because i thought 'this fic sucks so bad'. :P and thanks for the flowers, too ♥ (:

[bergusia]

Oh, teh pretteh!! I think I'm writing this every single time I read something 'fresh' here. *rolls eyes* But it's seriously so pretty. The last bit was totally hilarious, of course. XD But I loved the following line the most: There was a difference between 'being silent on purpose' and 'being lost for words', and Paul, if anything, had never been the second. Up to now. *le sigh+

&hearts

[esther_91]

(You know that I totally don't mind if you write 'teh pretteh' all the time. :PP *nudges you*) No, I'm really, really glad you liked my first attempt of serious!Paul/Ole ♥ - omg, I was fiddling with the sentences like crazy! :O

[bergusia]

But you did is so well, that I would never have guessed that you somehow struggled writing it. (Does that sentence even make sense? *rolls eyes*) *nods*

I'm glad you don't mind, love.

[aeroporto]

"Oh, just how kinky are you?"

LOL that line was hilarious.

But this fic is amazing. You wrote it really well and everyone knows Scholesy isn't the most talkative person on the planet and you brought that out nicely :)

[esther_91]

Thanks so much! *_*

I found it was quite difficult to write - they are so much about silence and thoughts, Paul and Ole. At least, for me. Sigh. :) So I'm happy to hear that I seem to have succeeded in getting the message across :D

[hiro_chan]

*is trying to collect her thoughts*

Wow. This is brilliant in so many levels. I feel you did absolutely great in this one and must say this is one of your best works so far :).

I absolutely adore the way you opened the fic - the comparison you made between Paul and Norway - it's brilliant and it rings absolutely true. Great touch there.

Your characterization is well done, both Ole and Paul came accross as very real, and the part where Paul was in lost of words, that's a nice scene there.

And of course, the ending. I love the gentleness of the scene and Paul's remark by the end is surprising but very suitable (and darn funny too! It did make me laugh out loud XD) - it kind of showed that he's back to his usual self, and that's an anding very well done.

Once again, lovly writing and very well thought :). Definitely going to my mem :D.

(AND YOU WROTE OLE/PAUL XDXDXD!!! Oh you *luuuuvvsss*)

[esther_91]

Definitely going to my mem :D.
- That's all it takes to make me jump around with joy! xD ( as well as the rest of your comment - thanks so much for the awesome feedback! *huggles* ♥ )

I have acutally been terribly unsure about this particular fic - it's been my first attempt to write serious Paul/Ole, and when I started, I just had this early morning idea of how Paul is like Norway...and a rough storyline, but it was kind of difficult to translate the things I wanted to say from my mind onto the paper - I've spent the whole day trying! :O

But I think I like writing Paul/Ole. They're so different from Cris/Wayne, or Rio/Vida. More thoughts. :P