That is possibly the cutest picture of any rat, evar. Even the Pixar and Dreamworks kind. It just wins, hands down.
I left a review. But bear in mind that I'm about as opposed to that sort of story as a demographic can be. However, I took a run at it and gave it some comments and criticism.
I was a wee bit brutal, but I'm sure you'd prefer that to a generic "Hey, this was pretty good and I want 2 c moar!" sort of review. I noticed a couple editing mistakes I highlighted and left some comments which you might use or might not, but either way they should give you some food for thought.
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anonymous
March 28 2010, 04:05:40 UTC
I tried using the term African-American around my Jamaican coworkers. To quote my foreman Turbo: "What the fuck? Man, why you gotta call us niggers that, man? Am I from Africa? Do I look like I'm a dirty-ass American?"
I'm not about to drop the n-bomb lightly, even if I've suddenly fained n-word privileges. Negro is a happy medium between stupidly politically correct and stupidly offensive, I feel.
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I left a review. But bear in mind that I'm about as opposed to that sort of story as a demographic can be. However, I took a run at it and gave it some comments and criticism.
I was a wee bit brutal, but I'm sure you'd prefer that to a generic "Hey, this was pretty good and I want 2 c moar!" sort of review. I noticed a couple editing mistakes I highlighted and left some comments which you might use or might not, but either way they should give you some food for thought.
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Anyway, wash the taste of romance out of your mouth with this tantalizing prologue... prologue to dinosaurs!
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2789640/1/
-LS
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I'm not about to drop the n-bomb lightly, even if I've suddenly fained n-word privileges. Negro is a happy medium between stupidly politically correct and stupidly offensive, I feel.
I will read the fantasy story soon, me promise.
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