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geminigrl11's birthday! Gem, you are one of the first people I met in the Supernatural fandom and I have valued our friendship since day one. You are an amazing writer and an even better friend. I hope your day is as fantastic as it should be
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I enjoyed this very much. ♥
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contrasted against the absolute pallor of the rest of his face
I love your phrasing here... even though I'm not sure Dean would know the word pallor. Which somehow makes it better, like Sam is inadvertantly one-uping him by the narrative using a higher vocabulary...
thanks Dean for once again handling everything while I act like an ass pretending that I’m not about to start projectile vomiting the moment your back is turned.
I can just picture the bitchface he's making into the pillow, heh.
Sam has been shot, beaten, burned and came back from the dead after being stabbed in the back but nothing is worse than dealing with Sam when he’s sick.
Adorable, and utterly made of win. (My brother is the same way, except with less bullets and dying...)
almost leaning in to Dean’s touch
and
“Dean,” Sam says, drawing out his name into multiple whiny syllables.
::is slightly dead::
Sam’s head on his thigh and Sam’s arm hooked around his knee. He’d ( ... )
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Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback! I always love to know what parts worked (or didn't) for readers.
*smish*
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