New OT4 Story: Lucky (NC-17) for JFlan's Birthday (oh so late)

[esteefee]

omg, I meant to write this two weeks ago. Sorry, Joe! (Not that you read polyamorous teamfic!)

Author: esteefee
Pairing: OT4
Rating: NC-17
Words: 3,601
Spoilers: none
Warnings: Very, very light dub-con while John figures things out.
Categories: post-series
Summary: Sometimes you just get so damned lucky.
A/N: This is a prequel to The Gods Must Be Crazy.

Comments

[sweeneybird]

“parts! Too many parts!”

You know, this has always been my concern as well. :-)

Beautifully written, smoking hot, and spot on characterization - YAY!

[esteefee]

too many! just! what's a boy used to a single cockpit supposed to do?

:)))))

[danceswithgary]

I grinned at John's distress over too many parts, but then you turned on the heat. *fans self* Lucky John!

[esteefee]

lucky, lucky boy. thanks, dances!

[sheafrotherdon]

:))) this is smokin' hot and beautifully done - the fondness and affection is wonderful. But what really makes it for me is poor John thinking parts! parts! semi-hysterically, drunk and horny and completely confused. Oh god, I love this so ♥

[esteefee]

EEEE! <3 <3 <3 the two smokin' hot sisters weren't even tempting, but for his team? for his team he'll risk parts fail. :D

*smishes you silly*

[chkc]

This is very lovely and hot!

Aw, John is so befuddled. I am glad that the team manages to overcome John's fears of managing all the parts / being a pudding cup / losing everything. There is so much love between the team. <3 *heart goes squish*

[esteefee]

oh, I love that sound! <3333

it's a tough life, being a pudding cup. ~:

[ceitie]

This story is so happy-making! John is very lucky indeed.

[esteefee]

isn't he just? :))))