Heroes: Here Without You (Peter/Claire)

[phoenix39]

Title: Here Without You
Author: Jane S./phoenix39
Rating: PG-13, just because.
Word Count: 973
Warnings: SPOILERS FOR “FOUR MONTHS LATER.”
Pairing: Peter/fantasy!Claire
Summary: Peter wakes up chained in a storage unit with no memory, except for a beautiful face.
Disclaimer: If I owned Heroes, do you think “Distractions” would have ended like that

Comments

[comiskey]

I knew that Peter amnesia thing would result in great Paire fic and this was an enjoyable read so soon after the episode. :) I loved how the thought of Claire (naming her Sandra as a connection to Five Years Gone was cool) was the one thing Peter had to hold on to and how he made up a whole fictional background of their relationship and the closeness he could sense even though he isn't sure about anything else. Well done!

[phoenix39]

YAY! I honestly squeed while reading your comment. I wasn't sure how people would respond. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much! XD

[comiskey]

Not a problem! It was a great fic and deserved squee-worthy feedback ;)

[ever_obsessed]

I've been sitting here waiting since the ep aired refreshing every five seconds and waiting for the first big post-S2 fic and, hee, it's here! *flails madly* I can't stop flailing, because, OMG, I got M3! And, hee, Claire misses Peter, and, OMG, I'm so close to passing out from excitement right now, it's almost scary! Sorry, just, um, I feel so vindicated as a Mo/Matt shipper! [/geek]

*takes a few deep breaths*

Okay, I'm okay!

Sandra would have taken care of him. If she were there, she’d feed him and make sure he was warm and comfortable.
Hee, nurse!Claire taking care of amnesiac!Peter!

Don't laugh at me, I can dream!

He didn’t know if these men were friends or foes, but they were his only hope of ever getting out of this shed and seeing Sandra again.
Oh, my god, I can't stop flailing.

I look like some kind of weird chicken or something, but, oh, so much to play with!

And such an awesome fic to start it off! ♥

[phoenix39]

Feel free to flail as much as you want. I'll join you.

I'm so glad you like the fic. Thanks for reading!

[meli_64]

Awesome. And you included like the best line ever. :D Great fic!

[phoenix39]

Thank you. And what would 'the best ever' be? XD

[kal_ella]

ooh! our very first paire fic, post-4 months later. it was excellent. and i loved Peter's remembrance of Claire, sorta. HEH!

will you continue? y/n? i hope you do! XD~~~*

[phoenix39]

I'm not sure. I'm planning a sequel that takes place when they meet again, but I need to figure out a few things, like how he escapes from the Irish mafia.

[obisgirl]

1st paire season 2 fic and I loved it! Awesome interpretation, and I loved how Peter named the girl "Sandra" <-- as said above, connecting it to "Five Years Gone."

[phoenix39]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. XD

[ladycat713]

I love how you had Claire be the one thing that Peter remembers and the whole history he makes up for them.Hopefully by the time he finds her it'll be found out that he's adopted because finding out that she's his niece would kill him from the shock. Excellent job.

[phoenix39]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)