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alternate - fiction - as the world turns - luke snyder/ dr. reid oliver

May 06, 2010 15:50

Title: Alternate
Author: esqueish
Rating: R
Length: 1185 words
Disclaimer: These crazy kids don't belong to me.
Summary: Luke doesn't leave, he stays right where he should be, in Reid's arms.
Notes: This is pretty much the dirtiest thing I've ever written. /hides behind hands But it needed to be written.

( Luke is overwhelmed, in the best sense of the word. )

lure, as the world turns, look kids nora finished something!, fan fiction

Comments 48

astrolatryae May 6 2010, 21:08:37 UTC

Luke doesn't have to see his face know he's smirking, and he grins as he retaliates with a hard grinding motion of his hips. Reid makes a strangled sound, throwing his head back, watching Luke through half lidded eyes. His hands are on Luke's hips, his own hips rocking upwards. "Fuck," he hisses, "I've been imagining this since you rode the bull in Dallas, covered in sweat, your hot little hips bucking as you ride my cock."

UNGH. I might have to go cool down now. Holy shit. Oh my god.

BRILLIANT. Thank you! Oh god I hope we get LuRe sex on the show SOON. I can't handle the wait anymore.

esqueish May 7 2010, 07:37:41 UTC

Thanks so much! AGREED. They are both so wound up, I think they could really use a stress reliever. I think I'm a little wound up too. xD

happyinchintz72 May 6 2010, 21:08:48 UTC

Oh my good god.
As if the SHOW didn't kill me enough.
That. was. flipping. amazing.

Just.wow. <3 <3 <3

esqueish May 7 2010, 07:30:58 UTC

Oh my goodness thank youuu, I'm all flushed. xD

dani_blondy May 6 2010, 21:13:20 UTC

Hee I love your tag "Look Kids Nora finished Something" haha :D

Awesome Fic Very Very Hawt why COULDN'T THIS HAPPEN

Pouts alot :)

esqueish May 7 2010, 07:29:58 UTC

ROFL It didn't happen very often before I got into this fandom, now it seems like I write fic every week or so. xD I agree! Oh, to have this storyline on a channel like Showtime or HBO...

suzvoy May 6 2010, 21:14:19 UTC

UM

...

SDFHLSDFJSDLFJSLFLSFJLLS

esqueish May 7 2010, 07:28:38 UTC

I'm sorry I reduced you to keyboard mash hun xD

.... /watches your icon for longer than probably appropriate

amelialourdes May 6 2010, 21:16:45 UTC

REID THE SECOND.

Greatest penis nickname, ever.

I really only have one thing to say about this: ASKL;FJSDL;FJKSALDJFS;LAJDFSLAKJDFLA!! MOREPLZRIGHTNOW. KTHX.

esqueish May 7 2010, 07:26:53 UTC

I thought Reid would be too dignified (or his ego is too big anyway xD) for something like Reid Jr. There's definitely a next installment in the works hun, thanks for commenting! : ]