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esprz

That Damn Cookie

Nov 23, 2012 22:24

Chapter 1
A/N Watch Evil Fortune Cookie before reading this or it won't make much sense!"Anthony Danger Padilla, will you marry me ( Read more... )

smosh, ring, marriage, slash, fanfic, ian hecox, baseball, ianthony fanfiction, fanfiction, wedding, fortune cookie, anthony padilla, humor, ianthony

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esprz November 27 2012, 10:48:16 UTC

Then it's a good thing I've already started writing it!

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esprz November 27 2012, 11:01:26 UTC

Don't fret young one, it will be done in due time :)
Man, I just re-read this and forgot how humorous it is. I'll have to tweak what I've written in ch2 so far.

mutual_death December 5 2012, 20:09:48 UTC

Holy mother that was awesome. Hahaha! I'm soooo glad you switched to Anthony's POV for the baseball scene. [= I was starting to feel embarrassed for him. This has got to be one of the best ideas for a fic. I wish I had thought of it. -jealous- :P

I do have one nit-picky thing. If they have only been married for a day, technically they can get the marriage annulled without having to divorce (which would take 5-6 months I believe). Hope that helps!

esprz December 5 2012, 21:16:19 UTC

Shhhhh! They don't know that!
Thanks by the way! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have most of chapter two done too so I should be posting it within the next couple of days ^-^
Also since this is directly based off a Smosh video their intelligence isn't as high as it normally is... haha.