[PoT]:: Jackal/Marui Yours Alone.

[espial]

Title: Yours Alone.
Pairing: Jackal/Marui.
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/Sexual situations/ 3,385
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis, nor do I make profit from it.
Summary: In which Jackal is repaid.
Notes: Please let me know your thoughts/constructive crit/comments.

Comments

[alexdonnelly]

"You're fine." Jackal reassured Marui. "Niou's just a dick." Between that and how Jackal took care of Sanada, I think I love you. The interaction between the Rikkai team was great. The interaction between Marui and Jackal was perfect. The fact that you didn't write Jackal off completely and made him so believably good (and still a normal teenage boy) is just so much win. <3

Thanks for sharing this! I'm definitely coming back to read more when I get a chance.

[espial]

I love Jackal. People forget about him and so I was a little scared to write him, but I'm glad that you think he turned out well. :)

Thank you for reading! I look forward to hearing from you again. :)

[perkyandproud]

Wow...this rocked. See, I'm so glad I friended you now!

I just love your Jackal. He's so believable and cool and just wonderful :-) And Marui...again, I feel you really captured that inner essence of their relationship quite well :-)

[espial]

Oh wow. Thank you. :) That really means a lot to me. I'm glad that you like it. I've always thought that maybe Jackal was the sane one out of the bunch, so I'm glad you like my take on him. :D

[everlind]

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I... I am just speechless. This was everything and more I'd hoped for! Despite the blossoming romance there was still so much bromance and tons of utterly perfect Rikkai interactions! Jackal was, well, he was perfect. Like alexdonnelly said you kept him being so damn good and patient while he was still all boy and horny teenager. But damn, the interaction was golden and I adored all the other Rikkai cameos.

I adore how you kept that 'repaying' prompt in there (in the best, most sexy and delicious way ever) XD

Oh, and the beginning where you describe their friendship was wonderful, too, with Jackal being conscious of being different and Marui just simply being his friend. And Akaya! thank you for writing him into a lot of outings with the boys, I like how you do young, brash teenager!Akaya.

Yeah.

Wow.

It was totally amazing.

Thank you <3

(may I link this on tumblr?)

[espial]

Thanks a lot, Eve, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Sure, if you'd like to do that you can.

[princecreepshow]

pleeeeeaaaase don't mind the RP-account. XD

I've been doing too mch Reborn!-related stuff, I first read 'Sawada' instead of 'Sanada'. *majorly fails* Anyway, I adore your Jackal, and the interaction of the team, and between Jackal and Bunta. There's surprisingly little stuff around with these two, considering most double-pairs, so I'm happy that you wrote this. Awesome! :D

That, and your icon is hilariously cute.

/Tezzino

[espial]

Belphegor!!! *fangulls.*

*giggles.* :) Thank you so much. There really isn't enough stuff of the two of them, and I adore them so much. :) I really appreciate it, and I'm' glad you liked it.

[princecreepshow]

Bel is totally the best character in Reborn. :D and RPing psychos is fun!

There needs to be more of these two, totally. And I need to get around to translate that doujinshi with them some day. To increase the goodies with them! ^^

[nerdish]

I ♥ him, :)

I fully support that! Bring on more of the Jackal/Marui love.

(don't mind the personal journal. I'm too lazy to switch out.)