[PoT]:: Oshitari/Atobe The near and dear ones

Dec 27, 2011 09:56

Title: The Near and the dear ones.
Pairing: Oshitari Yuushi/Atobe Keigo. Kabaji makes an appearance.
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/sexual situation/3,376
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Price of Tennis
Summary: In which Atobe's father throws a holiday party, and Atobe invites Oshitari, who wears a suit.
Notes: Please let me ( Read more... )

s: prince of tennis, fic, fic:gift [absolutehymn007], c: oshitari yuushi, c: atobe keigo

Leave a comment

Comments 13

darkelfgrl December 27 2011, 18:51:27 UTC
ASKDJFHKLSJFDH. This isn't even my prompt, but omg loved it. Love the way that Oshitari loves to rile up Atobe. And the description of what Oshitari is wearing? Unnf. Great job, lovie.

<333

Reply

espial December 27 2011, 19:36:47 UTC
:) Bwahhaha. I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much darlin'. It certainly was fun to write.

Reply


absolutehymn007 December 27 2011, 21:16:39 UTC
Atobe eat your vegetables!!! XD

I aways like imagining Atobe with a giant pile of pillows on his bed. It just sounds so comfy!

"I am my father's son."
"You are your parents' child."
Shutdown!

"Your words, they wound." LOL!!! It's so simple, but completely snarky. Especially with pressing his hand to his chest.

Oshitari makes a sexy santa lol. But his voice would put everyone on the naughty list!

Snarky banter between Atobe and Oshitari! It's my favorite thing about them ^^ All of their little turn-around comebacks and plays off each other sentences... the way they test each other to see who is going to win in the end. *happy sigh*

Aww... I'm glad Kabaji has found some love <3 ( ... )

Reply

espial December 29 2011, 17:03:51 UTC
I'm really glad you requested this, it's one of my favorite pairings. :D so I got a little carried away when I started working on it. I've always pictured Oshitari as being very snarky and almost slinky toward everyone and that in turn aggravates and intrigues Atobe. :)

Glad that you didn't mind the bit with Kabaji. I love him and he's so neglected. *pets him*

Thank you! I'm so very happy that you liked what I did with your prompts. And there should be another one posted today. I just want to tell you that I appreciate your friendship both on this journal and on nerdish despite it being a new friendship. You're a wonderful person, and I thank you for all your lovely feedback.

Ps: I like your icon very, very much ;)

PPS: I'll be doing another round of requests in January for Valentine's Day the following month if you're interested.

Reply

absolutehymn007 December 29 2011, 17:36:27 UTC
^^ I didn't know it was one of your favorites - it's definitely one of mine! <3 My few OshiAto fanfics have the same characterization that you have - except there isn't anyone else present for Oshitari to be slinky too. What a perfect word for him - slinky ( ... )

Reply

espial December 29 2011, 17:45:22 UTC
Ayup. :D My top three pairings (in order for once) Are Kirihara/Bunta, Oshitari/Atobe and actually Tezuka/Oishi which I never see and that makes me a sad panda. Oshitari is very slinky to me. It's the way he speaks and the way he moves and such. Almost like a big cat. Clearly I've invested too much into this.

Shiraishi/Kenya is something that I like. :D There's very few pairings that I dislike really. Though I haven't really written a lot of variety. I think your alpha pair was the first time I even considered it. :). The Valentine's day ones are going to be shorter, since I'm thinking just a 'kiss fic' request style, so there will be an opportunity to request more.

Sanada/Yagyuu.... *swoons.* I like this idea a lot. I've really started to adore Niou/Kirihara, it's crept up out of no where, though my best friend keeps linking me to art, which is essentially feeding the beast.

Reply


perkyandproud December 28 2011, 00:02:43 UTC
...I'm not the only one who thinks the way Oshitari says Atobe's name is pure sex! Yay!!

Wow, that was sweet, romantic, sexy and hot! How DO you do it? LOL!

Wonderful story!

Reply

espial December 29 2011, 17:10:51 UTC
Nope, you are not alone. Hahaha. :D Lots and lots of coffee is how I do it. I don't even know. I just end up thinking they're okay and then put them up. :D

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you like this. I appreciate it so much.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

espial December 29 2011, 17:12:11 UTC
oh darling! ♥ I'm glad you took a chance on it. I think they're my favorite after AkaBun. :D

Speaking of AkaBun, I'm going to pour myself another cup of tea and post yours up. :)

Thank you again lovely.

Reply


everlind January 13 2012, 22:29:44 UTC
I love Yuushi.

I make no secret of it. He's amazing. And I also love your writing. And when you write Yuushi? Hot dang. And I do like him so damn much when you write him getting Atobe all hot and bothered. Yes.

The banter was golden. You have these two boys' interaction down so very well, it is a delight to see 'em at it.

And the groping/grinding/teasing finale.

Yeah.

Shower now.

Reply

espial January 13 2012, 23:24:04 UTC
I love Yuushi too, you know that so much. :)

As much as I love Akaya, Yuushi is my favorite to write. He comes very naturally for me. And you know how much I love OshitariAtobe so much.

Thanks, bebe, I'm glad that you liked it. It was a lot of fun to write.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up