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[Uraboku]:: Hotsuma/Shusei Someone Like You.

Dec 12, 2011 12:17

Title: Someone Like You.
Pairing: Hotsuma Renjou/Shusei Usui
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/blow job/2,104
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Uraboku (The Betrayal Knows My Name)
Summary: In which Hotsuma acts without thinking, overreacts, and is given what he wants.
Notes: Please let me know your thoughts/constructive crit/comments ( Read more... )

fic, s: uraboku, c: usui shusei, c: renjou hotsuma

Comments 10

glowstarducky December 12 2011, 21:23:28 UTC

I don't know this fandom but akfjksdjfkjsdkljfajkdsfjlak'fjkl'

espial December 13 2011, 03:50:20 UTC

You should check it out. :) It's a pretty good series. *nods lots.*

darkelfgrl December 13 2011, 01:38:02 UTC

ASKLJDHFLKJASHFDJK. I can't express how much I love it when Hotsuma touches/kisses/ Shusei's scars in fiction, and this makes me happy. I'm all kinds of happy to see this fic here and loved it!

espial December 13 2011, 03:50:57 UTC

<3 I'm glad you like it. :) Thanks bestie.

jessiedark December 15 2011, 02:33:14 UTC

yeah, soooo sweet

espial December 19 2011, 01:22:58 UTC

Thank you. :)

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espial December 19 2011, 01:27:28 UTC

Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you liked it. :)

absolutehymn007 December 26 2011, 22:06:12 UTC

I thought that I had left a review for this story. And then I noticed I didn't. *for shame* Volume 2 was released some weeks ago, but I just bought it two days ago. It was the Shuusei + Hotsuma arc and I was all aslfkjda;lfkjda;fj because I love them.

Anyway, I've always liked how tender Hotsuma is around Shuusei considering he is a hot-headed person. It makes their relationship even more precious!

"The ability to form higher thought failed him for the second time that day when Shusei's fingers brushed along the nape of his neck." I really liked this sentence! I think it was because it wasn't a kiss and therefore was a bit more unexpected.

Hmmm, I liked how there wasn't really any talking during their smexy scene - just a lot of descriptive, sensory sentences and just how good Hotsuma was feeling.

The ending was simple and sweet - a warm ending to a wonderful piece :)

espial December 26 2011, 22:53:08 UTC

Have I told you recently how much I appreciate your feedback? If not, let me tell you, that there are no words to express my gratitude. :) It brightens my day, seriously.

I finished the anime, and my friend just left the second omnibus with me, I haven't opened it yet, but it's on my stack to read.

Thank you for reading, and taking the time to tell me what you liked about it. I am so very happy that you liked it.

absolutehymn007 December 27 2011, 02:27:53 UTC

^_____^ I am so glad that I am able to brighten your day. I try to leave a detailed comment when I read that shows exactly what moved me because you, the author, has put in so much time to write it. I love it when people do the same for me and point out things that I never noticed as having much significance, or if it's a multi-chapter fic, start guessing what might happen next. *hugs*

I think I stopped three episodes from the end 'cause I got busy with school or something. It was running at the same time as Kaichou wa Maid-sama I think and I had to split my time. *doesn't remember too well* I plan on finishing it though. I hope you enjoy reading it! Much Shuusei and Hotsuma love there (Shuusei's definitely my favorite).

Of course. You're very welcome!