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[Bleach]: fanfic

Jan 30, 2009 22:58

Title: Fairy Tales
Author: reapandcollect
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: None, really. Hints at Hitsugaya Toshiro x Matsumoto Rangiku
Rating: PG
Word Count: 745
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from the characters of Bleach.
Author's Notes: Many thanks to my beta sunlesslands. This is for bleach_contest prompt:Once Upon a Time. Con-crit is appreciated. Comments are love. This is ( Read more... )

fic, s: bleach, c: hitsugaya toshiro, c: matsumoto rangiku

Comments 6

coffee_gyrl January 31 2009, 16:07:33 UTC

So cute, sweet and short, very nice. I would like to have heard a second line of the story though, maybe something like .... there lived a beautiful ... miko, princess, valkry... something. But I did like this.

anonymous January 31 2009, 19:31:37 UTC

Ohh that was so sweet! I loved it! :D

Great job, your writing is awesome! :3

sunlesslands January 31 2009, 22:57:28 UTC

You are amazing and this is awesome! I love the bittersweet tone and how much Hitsugaya cares for her and how vulnerable Rangiku is -- just a win, all the way around.

fine_lights February 3 2009, 04:35:37 UTC

Aww. You really captured the tender/awkward way these two show that they care about each other!

karkashan March 4 2009, 03:00:02 UTC

That was soooo sweet. I really like how you captured how both characters act right down to a tee.

espial March 4 2009, 03:07:06 UTC

Thank you. :D