[PoT]:: Yagyuu x Niou/ In Focus.

[espial]

Title: In Focus
Pairing: Yagyuu Hiroshi x Niou Masaharu.
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/blow job/ 2,105
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Prince of Tennis.
Summary: During his first year of university Niou has a difficult assignment, and Yagyuu helps him out.
Notes: Originally for monarchist for the switching_it_up exchange. Comments and con-crit are

Comments

[espial]

Thank you so much lovely! ♥ *hugs* I'm glad that you like it.

[pergamond]

I really liked this~

[espial]

Thank you very much. :)

[hyakuiro]

I squee-ed so much when I saw how detailed you described the dark room! It is love. *___*

And I loved the ending; the way you described the both of them in that last paragraph, it's so perfectly captured in so little words.

Maybe it's because I'm reading this at 3+am, but this phrase confused me and I had to re-read to make sense of it:
his jaw relaxing nose brushing Niou’s stomach
Probably needed a comma in there, though the imagery was super amusing. XDD

Thank you for writing!

[espial]

I miss having a dark room and all of my clothing stink like developer. >.> That might have gotten away from me.

Thank you very much. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

*faceplant.* Yeah. Needed a comma. Thanks for pointing that out.