[PoT]- fan fic

[espial]

Title: Into the Rabbit Hole.
Author: espial
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Shishido Ryou x Ohtori Choutarou [Silver Pair]
Rating: R warning: petting.
Word Count: 1544
Summary: It started on a dark and stormy night.
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from the characters of Prince of Tennis.
Author's Notes: This is for everlind. Many thanks to the

Comments

[neooldetokyo]

Oh this is lovely! Silver pair yumminess :)
I can just imagine Shishido lying there, toying with Ohtori's hair, blushing at being so 'girly' :)

[espial]

*flails* I'm so happy that you like this. :) (first time writing silver pair.) Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

[everlind]

O_O

YES.

YES.

I just- YES!

*jumps you*

There's so much good in there... I just don't know where to start. I could just y'know go: 'I liked this part best' and then copy and paste the whole damn thing.

What I like very, very much is that Ohtori was the one to stop messing about and kiss him *sigh* This is just the right amount of clumsy and sweet and awkward and teenage hormones.

Also yay! for Shishido's dog making an appearance. With a squeaking toy (I want a dog too *bawls*).

But what was most beautiful was the part at the end where Shishido is caressing Ohtori so carefully, ah man, that just makes my Silver Pair muse writhe in ecstasy.

GUH. Thanks so much for this. What a way to start the new year *hopes this is a portent of more good things to come*

Thanks love ♥

[espial]

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Oh god I am so very very very happy that you like this. I fretted, and flailed about it to anyone who would listen. And even to those who wouldn't listen.

*shares her puppy.* watch out he farts.

You are very welcome. I hope I did them justice, oh Queen of the Silver Pair fic.

♥

[dark_kana]

oh yes! such cute yumminess! XD
*goes off reading it again*

[espial]

*grins* I am very happy that you like it. Thanks you! :)

why oh why do i have no silverpair icon on this account.

[eiryuu]

that was -so- good. guhhh my brain it is now happy gooey MUSH.

the interaction was greatly adored in its tentative-yet-not-ness and the kissing was tho-rou-ghly Enjoyed in its held-back desperation and the whole thing was just awwww'some. yay for getting sleeptime together! i love cuddly (or semi-cuddly, or just-barely-cuddly, even xD";; ) sleeps. ^__^"~~ <3

muchlove! thank you for sharing! *got here via tori_shishi, btw n_n";;

Re: why oh why do i have no silverpair icon on this account.

[espial]

Thank you so very much for reading and taking the time to leave such a lovely comment! I really appreciate it. :) I'm so glad you like this. :D