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shatteredjewels in esper_cave

Terra and Locke - Ghosts

Jun 10, 2011 22:24

Title: Ghosts
Theme + Number: 9. Fight
Claim: Terra and Locke (challenge)
Characters/Pairings included: Celes, Rachel
Rating: K+
Warnings: Well... This relating to the prompt made sense in my head...
Summary: Terra doesn't mind ghosts.

( Ghosts )

Comments 6

leasspell_dael June 11 2011, 20:40:15 UTC

Oooh. I like. Interesting perspective on the differences between Terra and Celes. I wonder if Terra understands the need for the past so well, by sheer virtue of the fact that she's lacking her own? Thanks for sharing!

shatteredjewels June 15 2011, 00:17:40 UTC

Initially, this had a whole long thing about how Terra has the pressure of an entire race on her shoulders but can't remember any of it, but I didn't like it so I cut it down to what you see.

Now, as I write that, I'm tempted to write about Terra's set of ghosts. Maybe some of the espers have spirits hanging around even after magic... Hmmm...

Anyway, sudden inspirations aside, thanks for reading!

deadcellredux June 12 2011, 02:27:22 UTC

Wow! This is really unique. I like it!!! Such an interesting moment in time depicting shifts in the characters' relationships... I don't think I've ever seen Rachel depicted as a visible ghost in any fic before. It's creepy... but, I guess if anyone would be able to emotionally deal with THAT, it'd be Terra... o_O

shatteredjewels June 15 2011, 00:17:58 UTC

Yeah, she's a pretty strong chicka. :P Thanks for reading!

ovo_lexa June 15 2011, 19:11:22 UTC

XD

I had exactly that idea for the prompt. I think you did it far better, though. :)

shatteredjewels June 17 2011, 06:22:17 UTC

Wait, so someone else turned fight into... ghost-fight?

lol, you saying that is ironic considering I'm pretty sure I was inspired by the couple ficlets you've written with ghost!Rachel wandering around...