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esp_dragon

Inappropriate

Sep 03, 2011 06:35

Fandom: Noblesse
Summary: This crush was completely inappropriate for a noble like himself.
Rating: G
Notes: Contains Regis/M-21.
Set after 154.
Written for the prompt, 'Noblesse, M-21/Regis: attraction - This crush is completely inappropriate for a noble like himself' for springkinkWhen I label pairings, the first name is the narrative character, in case ( Read more... )

character: regis k. landegre, fanfic: inappropriate, fandom: noblesse, character: m-21

Comments 12

fire_ban September 3 2011, 09:08:44 UTC

awww, so cute~ xD ♥ and so is the image of tao and takeo at the door outside LOL. i like the thought that frankie totally knew and called them away on purpose. regis is adorable. 8D

darkicedragon September 4 2011, 05:26:51 UTC

*grins* Thank you!

(Bwahaha, of course everyone knew! XDD You'd have to try really hard to hide something from them! And even then, they'd still know you were trying to hide something.)

XD He iiiiis.

kiuolo September 3 2011, 15:45:26 UTC

Aw! I love this pairing. <3

That being said, you did an excellent job! I have to admit, I was with Regis in thinking that what M-21 said was an indirect rejection, right up until he started realizing. Then I was like, "Oh, wait a second... wait... Yes... YES! AHAHAHA! *strikes victory pose*" xD And I can totally see this happening! You wrote them so wonderfully in character, and it was all just so...! Ahhhh~!

Also, the part at the end where Takeo and Tao were up against the door and trying to listen in literally made me laugh out loud. Haha. I loved it all! Please, keep up the good work! I'm practically begging you here! x3

darkicedragon September 4 2011, 05:37:55 UTC

♥~

Hee! :D Thank you!

\o/ I was hoping for this reaction (and hoping people wouldn't click away before the end. XDD).

I'll try to! I've got two more Noblesse prompts filled for springkink (not Regis/M-21 though) and...huh, three decently sized wips. I should probably complete those before the plotbunnies hop away...

darlingfox September 4 2011, 18:36:38 UTC

Oh, Regis, you just think you're so smooth. If it weren't so very inelegant, he'd probably doodle little hearts and Regis+M-21s on his papers at school. XD

I really liked the setup, that everyone totally knew what was going on and that Frankenstein (possibly after too many "all this UST is giving me headaches" moments) dragged them out. And Tao would eavesdrop because he just can't help himself. XD

Anyway, this was great! They all felt in character from Regis and his adorable not-so-smoothness to M-21 and his smugness (hah, he would be). ♥

darkicedragon September 4 2011, 20:19:16 UTC

What're you talking about? Regis can totally doodle elegant hearts! ;P (And now a plotbunny is biting me on one way M-21 might have found out.
M-21: *is cleaning the table*
M-21: Hm. Regis left his homework out. What exactly do they learn at the school anyway?
M-21: *flicks through the book*
M-21: ...
Tao: Hey, what are you staring at?)

*and now just watches the plotbunnies multiply all over the place* So now I want to write something about how M-21 found out, possibly Frankenstein's reaction to it (Maybe something along the lines of 'Aw, now they can get along!' *waits* 'Nothing's happening, and I know M-21 knows.' *waits some more* 'Is Regis not going to...? *waits even more* *sigh* 'Clearly something needs to be done'. And then he finds out after Regis has confessed that they still bicker and argue like always. XDDD), and Takeo and Tao's conversation in full as they're eavesdropping (I don't think this one would be very long but...yeah. Travel the World. XP;;)

Heeee! Thank you! :D

lucathia_rykatu September 7 2011, 06:22:34 UTC

Hehe, Regis POV! :D He is so preoccupied!

He was fairly sure M-21 was completely unaware and that Takeo and Tao were similarly ignorant.
Yeah, that's what you think. =P But hehe, yes, Takeo and Tao would tell each other. And Tao would ask questions, Regis says. Mmhm, I can see that happening. XD; But what if he actually has self constraint? XD

This…crush he had on M-21 was completely inappropriate for a noble like himself.
I really like that line. :D

Strange to think of M-21 as a tenth of Regis's age. He seems older. XD; Both appearance, and personality-wise. Oh, and the way he carries himself! Regis reminds me of a youngster... he blends in with the kids well. XD

the more the respect for him grew
EEEeeeee~

he was protective of the children enough to die for them
YESssss

he was fiercely loyal to those few he gave his trust to, and Regis would be confident that his back was well-protected if M-21 was there.
:D

Everyone else, barring himself and M-21, had left in a relative hurry, including Takeo, whose job it was to help clean ( ... )

darkicedragon September 7 2011, 12:59:37 UTC

Bwahaha. Ever so slightly.

" But what if he actually has self constraint? XD"
Tao? Have self-restraint? When's Regis ever seen that? XDDD

"I really like that line. :D"
It's an awesome prompt line. :D

"Strange to think of M-21 as a tenth of Regis's age."
I knoooow. And...I completely failed at maths here, because I could not figure out the calculation. XD;;; I got very strange results.

"Regis reminds me of a youngster... he blends in with the kids well. XD"
*snickers* Regis sometimes just gives off the air of a kid who's trying to be an adult, but then, Regis is really young compared to the other nobles.

*loves your squeeing* XD

"*imagines either of them with flowers and chocolate*
....
XD;;;"
...
Pffffffhahaha~~ In terms of looks (if M-21 was wearing his uniform), flowers and chocolate would probably suit them, but in terms of personality, bwahahaha!! (And then of course, I'd been thinking of if either of them would even know if flowers and chocolate were considered romantic in some places ( ... )

lucathia_rykatu September 9 2011, 03:47:45 UTC

What kind of results for his age? :3

Yup, Regis feels like a kid trying to be an adult. I guess it makes sense when a lot of the other nobles are a lot older, and he hasn't had his coming of age ceremony. XD;

LOL! Yeah, flowers and chocolate wouldn't look too out of place with M-21, but I can see everyone reacting a whole lot if he suddenly showed up with them. Imagine Tao's reaction! XD;;;

darkicedragon September 10 2011, 08:22:07 UTC

*tries is again* O____o I seem to be getting the right answer now? *facepalm* I'd ended up going, 'Okay, if I'm assuming M-21 is at least 25, and Regis is about 200, and there's four 25s in 100, so if I times that by 2 I get... I AM CONFUSED. D: D:'

*thinks about it* Oooooooh, I think that's what I was trying to do: I was trying to convert the fraction into time because I was trying to multiply it by something to make a number and omgggggg. So bad at maths! *headdesk*

Bwahahaha!!! Nononono, Tao would be the one suggesting M-21 bring flowers and chocolate! XDDDDD

M-21: Why am I...?
Tao: *Bright grin*
Tao: Because it's romantic!
M-21: *blink*
M-21: But why would I-
Tao: *shoves him out the door with everything in tow* *Then possibly goes to find a camera* *or hack into one of the buildings close by so he can watch from there*

emeraldxdew September 9 2011, 19:07:26 UTC

This is lovely and adorable~! I didn't even like this pairing that much, but I guess it's more plausible than the other M-21 pairings out there. >_>

I think you've converted me into a fan of M-21/Regis. Congratulations.

This scene is written so well it's like it popped out of the actual manhwa. Poor Regis. Neither of them are very romantic, but I think the verbal sparring is good enough for now. XD

Please write more...? :D

darkicedragon September 11 2011, 21:22:14 UTC

Hee! Thank you~

\o/

Pfffft, I don't think M-21 would have a clue what to do if he tried to be 'romantic'. XDDD And who knows what 'romantic' is for nobles. XDD

I don't think I'll be writing more of this fic, apart from probably making my author's note an actual scene, but I am writing a couple of fics where M-21 and Regis are the main characters/focus. :3