Searching [Romance AU]

[esp_dragon]

Fandom: Original fiction
Summary: Marland is sending mixed signals…
Rating: M
Notes: Contains a sex scene on the TV

Comments

[lucathia_rykatu]

This was making me go "Awwww, Shodin!" I felt a lot more of his voice here! (though it was mostly him being confused and wondering a lot about what stuff meant *g*).

Really loved how Shodin was getting sidetracked by Marland's hair. |D

KADFL;A Marland mistaking Shodin's question as merely going out to the movies... poor Shodin!

Haha, that movie they were watching at the end doesn't sound very romantic or sexy.

Are you continuing from where this leaves off? But oh, that status says "complete". :3 It feels like the next scene should happen right after this though, since Shodin hasn't gotten through to Marland yet with what he actually meant!

[darkicedragon]

*grins* \o/ Yey!

XD It was fun putting Shodin getting distracted by Marland's hair. I guess Shodin never actually told Marland that part of his hair stuck up in the end. XDD

XD;;;; Every time I read through this, I cringed at that line. Ah, poor Shodin!

But - but he saved her from death! And they totally - pfffft, don't want to continue. There was a film I'd watched kinda recently where the romance was really badly tacked on; I think the main character and the love interest had spent...hm, was it the Robin Hood movie? o____o;; That wasn't very recent. Anyway. XD;; The two characters had interacted with each other in a few scenes, treating each other normally and then they kiss! Wait, what? Where had that come from?

XD; Yep! This is where I get confused at my header, because this part is finished, but the overall plot-thing isn't. And I think I'll be thinking of the Romance AU as parts rather than having an overall structure. And I don't know if this will ever get a fully complete tag, because I have no idea how this could end. So