Trail [First Path]

[esp_dragon]

Fandom: Noblesse
Summary: He had been alone for a long time, but then he found a trail that brought him to a human settlement.
Rating: K+
Notes: Rated for swearing

Comments

[lucathia_rykatu]

I thought it was going to be completely from the OC POV. XD; Ah, were form sounds like it's short for werewolf form, so even though you pointed it out, I kept thinking, "werewolf form?" when it was mentioned in the fic. XD;;

What humans used for transport - noisy and stinky. XD; Must be very much so for him with heightened senses!

His Kin was alone, which explained why his territory was smaller than what he thought it would be.
Interesting for him to think this way. I'm wondering what would even be considered his territory. XD;

Humans here didn't sleep;
Didn't sleep... in general? XD;

His Kin had frozen on the spot, his eyes wide. He paused, his ears sinking.
Ahaha, this is where I get confused by the pronouns. *rereads*

"You're human," he snarled.
Ouch. Though definitely something new for M-21!

"We need to find it quickly," he murmured. "They can't erase memories."
I almost forgot about the memories thing.

He left just like that! I guess you couldn't get him to stay. =P

[darkicedragon]

XD It pretty much is! XDD;; I think it's standard in some fantasy novels to use were as a short form of werewolf?

*laughs* Aaaah, poor him. X3

I think the wolf assumed that the entire city was M-21's territory, because it's got the boundaries already set. Or something. The school and his home is M-21's territory! *nods* :3

"Didn't sleep... in general? XD;"
The wolf had been used to humans pretty much never venturing out once the sun set so coming into a city where people (groups of people, even!) are out into the tiny hours is weird for him. There's also the fact that he might think the buildings are kinda like reeeeally tall castles, so there's a lot of space, but not so many people in them. And then there's the fact that he doesn't know that you can fit, y'know, several million people in the one space. (Although, hmm, he might have been able to smell that. Oh wait, the cars and all the other pollution stuff might be able to help hide it.) So, uh, the number of people that he's seen at night might possibly be the number he's used

[lucathia_rykatu]

Hm, I don't seem to read enough novels around werewolves (or just wolves). :3

Ahaha, the entire city! The school and his home... well, he's going to realize that's not the case in the second path, I guess? XD

Ahhh, I see. Must be very different being in the city compared to villages he was used to. Especially since people now keep weird hours. XD;

I can tell which "he" the pronouns refer to, though I need to read that one several times since it changes in the second sentence? Adding in "when he saw this" helps! *___*

Sending Frankenstein after him... XDD;;