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Nov 30, 2010 22:55

Fandom: Original
SummaryThe world of Torpin is open, dragging in Others from different worlds. The majority of them are monsters, prone to violence. There are some, however, that are not, and are able to live amongst the human population, if allowed to. Marland should know; he's one of them. His job is to hunt and stop the Others that seek only to ( Read more... )

character: shodin, character: marland, original: searching, nanowrimo, fandom: original fiction

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lucathia_rykatu December 1 2010, 08:44:17 UTC
It had six legs, two big wide horns on its head that were curved forward and were about the length of his forearm. It looked mostly like a horse, but hairier and bigger. It was also completely white.
You have an awesome imagination for monsters. *___* Six legs + horns does make me think of... insects though. XDD

Everything was brightening slowly, and Marland could hear a crinkling sound in the air, almost like slow hissing static.
He can tell when Shodin's using his magic. :3 Coool.

He was then thrown back by another blast of the Other's magic.
*flails* He's getting hurt again!

Fair enough his job was to kill Others, but he didn't want to TORTURE them.
Those Others were pulled out of their natural habitat. ):

That was when the world BURNED white, a tremendous band surrounding them, and Marland was both blinded and deaf, a hollow ringing in his ears that seemed to echo in his head as well.
0_____0;; Huh, what burns white? Stray magic from Shodin? Another portal opening?

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darkicedragon December 5 2010, 08:07:13 UTC
:P No, I don't - I was mostly aiming for a strange looking reindeer.

X3 Yeeep.

XD *laughs* When is he not?

): Yep. I was thinking so much about the Others' situation at the start, because, well, yeah, they're suddenly out of their habitat, no idea where they are, an then there's suddenly a whole bunch of noise and/or flashing - they're going to attack or run away.

*facepalm* Tyyypo. Tremendous bang. The next part is up! So... I didn't actually explain what that was there. Oops. Doubt Marland would find out either.

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lucathia_rykatu December 6 2010, 23:44:36 UTC
A reindeer??? XDDD Okay, different image than what I got...

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darkicedragon December 7 2010, 08:34:20 UTC
Which shows I really need to work on my description. :P

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