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Fandom: Original
SummaryThe world of Torpin is open, dragging in Others from different worlds. The majority of them are monsters, prone to violence. There are some, however, that are not, and are able to live amongst the human population, if allowed to. Marland should know; he's one of them. His job is to hunt and stop the Others that seek only to

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[lucathia_rykatu]

Ah, so it was Shodin! Oh huh, it's actually Shodin and not Puzz. But ahh, it looks like magic has quite a toll on him.

Haha, I loved the scene between Shodin, Laris, and Nav. I wonder what Laris and Nav think about Shodin. They're probably surprised at his presence with Marland. :3

Shodin has very interest questions about what's done to the bodies. Now I'm imagining the government doing experiments of some sort. =P

Ah, Shodin doesn't know how to read. I wonder if it's just this world's text he doesn't know, or he just doesn't know in general. I guess he wouldn't know. =P And, it'd be pretty useless even if he could read some other text.

and then Shodin was watching the chicken through the glass
The chicken's not doing anything. Is it that interesting? =P Cute image. XD

It sounds like magic is reaaally painful for Shodin, either physically or mentally or both.

Ahhh, but...physical contact between Marland and Shodin! =P Looks like Marland hasn't freaked out yet!

[darkicedragon]

*grins*

XD So do I~ I kinda really like most of the other characters in this and wish I could show what's going in their heads in the narrative. Laris had the suspicion Shodin was just a person Marland had saved from the Others and had pushed for a way to thank him - and then Marland picks up the rest of the shopping and they start walking off together without a word. Huh. X3 Now he's curious, because he knows what Marland's like. Nav just shrugs it off. *snerk*

XD Shodin asks questions about eveerythiiing. *laughs* Eeeeeee. XD

But - but, the chicken's lit up! :O *snickers*

*snerk* Both, though it's more mental and his body following through.

Marland didn't freak out because his mind just completely blanked on that. XD He sorta had a collision of 'argh, touch!', 'what the fuck do I do?', 'what the hell?', 'what the hell just happened?' and 'get food out the way - don't want to clean it up', so his brain kinda shut down in protest and his body just froze without any instructions telling it what to do. XDD

[lucathia_rykatu]

*continues lobbing comments at you even though it's 4 AM, again, hahahaha*

Sidestories! That calls for sidestories with different POVs! XD; We only get Marland's POV, right? So totally skewed by his perceptions. XD

I guess it did... light up. =P At first I thought the chicken was in the microwave, and then though, oh, then Shodin can watch it go around and around. But oh wait, it's in the oven. It doesn't even move. XD

[darkicedragon]

*looks at the time* I think it was five when you posted this... *laughs*

XD Waaa~ So much writing to be done! I'll see if I can do them later! ♥

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