Comments | esmecarlisle: Oneshot: Give Me a Moment

x_lipsofgrace in esmecarlisle

Oneshot: Give Me a Moment

Mar 22, 2010 21:49

Title: Give Me a Moment
Author: x_lipsofgrace
Characters/Pairing: Carlisle/Esme
Rating: K
Category: Hurt/Comfort/Romance
Summary: After the birth of Renesmee, Esme can't help but mourn for the son she lost so many decades ago...
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5836636/1/Give_Me_a_Moment

( Years had passed since she thought of her human life. It was a blur in her memory, but her baby boy's face shone brightly in a midst of darkness. )

fanfic

Comments 4

lily_lemonade March 23 2010, 18:35:10 UTC

Aww, that was so sweet and heartfelt, and brilliantly written! I loved how Esme did her best to be strong in spite of how much she hurt, and the way Carlisle comforted her.

<3 <3 <3

x_lipsofgrace March 25 2010, 03:48:42 UTC

Thanks, lovely. <3 I actually had a bit of a hard time writing it because I know Esme is so torn and Carlisle CAN'T DO ANYTHING!

(The comment has been removed)

x_lipsofgrace March 25 2010, 03:48:10 UTC

Thank you, dear! :)

lily_lemonade March 26 2010, 19:35:46 UTC

You're welcome. I would never have guessed that you had difficulty with this fic, as it came out fantastically. You did both Esme and Carlisle's characters justice, so don't worry! :)