Gift for velvetmouse - Five Times There Honestly Was Nothing Going On (McCoy/Chapel, PG)

Jan 03, 2013 22:09

Title: Five Times There Honestly Was Nothing Going On
Author: esme_green
Recipient: velvetmouse
Characters: McCoy/Chapel with cameos by Kirk, Rand, Sulu, Scotty, Spock, Uhura
Rating: PG, but definite trope abuse
Summary: Five times there really was nothing going on between McCoy and Chapel. For velvetmouse for the mccoy_chapel Holiday Exchange. Your prompt threw the doors wide open...hope ( Read more... )

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velvetmouse January 4 2013, 12:17:14 UTC
eeee! zomg, this was *awesome!* I was having such a crappy morning and this just has me grinning. thank you SO MUCH! I love love love it! All of it. I'd just end up quoting the whole thing back at you. eeeee! :D

ETA coherence, now that I'm somewhat awake and not running out the door:
I love how you wove Janice's story around the 5 things - those are the best kind of 5 things/times pieces. I love the casual intimacy between chapel and mccoy that means one thing under one set of assumptions and another thing with a different set of knowledge. kirk/rand! <3 Although, I have to wonder what kind of world of hurt jim and christine are in for when janice finds out what's going on! *grin* Thank you for making me fall in love with these characters all over again!

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esme_green January 6 2013, 03:15:32 UTC
Wow!!! I'm so glad you liked it...your prompt was cool and general which made it easy to play with :) Thanks so much for the awesome feedback!

And I figure Jim and Christine work it so that Janice doesn't have a clue until everyone loses interest and the bet goes defunct :)

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janus_74 January 4 2013, 15:07:45 UTC
That was awesome! I loved all the tropes :)

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esme_green January 6 2013, 03:17:17 UTC
:))))) Glad you liked!!!

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seren_ccd January 5 2013, 13:46:46 UTC
Oh, my God, I LOVE THIS! Your dialogue is spot on and so much fun. Just a fantastic fic!

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esme_green January 6 2013, 03:17:55 UTC
Yay!!!!! So happy you enjoyed it! :)

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lullabymoon January 6 2013, 17:36:35 UTC
Oooh, this is utterly awesome! It's left me with a grin on my face, and I just love Christine getting her own back! :D

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esme_green January 7 2013, 04:23:32 UTC
Thank you so much! So glad you liked it :) Christine is determined, that's for sure. :D

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sleepygoof8784 January 14 2013, 00:02:53 UTC
I am soo late on commenting on this story. I read it a while ago and when I was rereading I realized I hadn't commented. Sorry about that.

I loved this! So adorable and the way it switches between Jim and Janice and the McCoy/Chapel flashbacks is perfect! Such a great way to do this kind of a story.

And so funny. I love the ending as well. Of course Jim and McCoy are in working in collusion. :)

Perfect!

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esme_green February 9 2013, 16:02:31 UTC
And I am soooo late in responding! I'm so glad the format worked and you enjoyed it!

(Kirk and Bones...still each other's wingman!)

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