BtVS fic: Broken, Drusilla/Buffy

[escritoireazul]

Title: Broken
Author: escritoireazul
Written for: snowpuppies for femslash_minis Round 25. Request: Buffy and Drusilla, dirt, panties, sexy kissing.
Warning: Character death.
Rating: 13+
Word Count: 1100+
Setting: Alternate season three in which Drusilla returns instead of Spike.

Summary: Death surrounds her, written in blood and written in bone.

Comments

[mierke]

I love how you set the tone in the first part. Buffy seems so incredibly tired, I can just feel it.

There is blood in her veins. Drusilla scratches stars in the dirt, secrets without words, constellations of futures as yet untold.

In the darkness, deadly flowers bloom, their scents so heavy and sweet. Drusilla watches and waits.
I love your Drusilla. She's spot-on crazy, in that eery psychic way.

Very beautiful!

[escritoireazul]

Thank you so much! I'm always leery about writing Drusilla because I don't want to head into the over-written, trying too hard crazy, but she has such an interesting view of the world.

[ladycallie]

This is such a perfect story, almost prose at times. Beautiful imagery, rich, luscious storytelling. I very much enjoyed.