Possibly pre-Rayne fic

[esclaramonde]

Have allegedly committed fic. I've had bunnies a-plenty ever since I joined the Rayne-ship and one of them had me go as far as committing pen to paper (and subsequently fingers to keyboard). Thing is, I'm not sure about it. I'm not so hot with the humour, which is a big part of the Firefly fandom. And I just happen to prefer the two

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[toxic_corn]

*wipes up accumulated drool*

Just so you know, this started a fight between curikitten and me. We both wanted to just bask in the images that our IM-ing each other got us all testy and annoyed. XD Awesome job.

*adds to memories*

[curi_o]

She doesn't mean good job at making us fight, I don't think.

*gives toxic significant look* Do you?

That's what I thought.

[toxic_corn]

*shrinks* Maybe? I think I meant she wrote fic that was so awesome and splendiferous that it would cause two friends to fight because they'd rather be reading it and not inanely messaging back and forth? And that's what made it awesome?

Also, I liked the mental facepalming over the space bug rhyme. That was cute.

[curi_o]

Oh. Well, that's okay then.

Dude, I know a bed bugs song. It goes like this:

Onward loyal bedbugs
Marching up the sheet
Tickle, Tickle, Tickle
Tickle Grandma's feet.

Grandma got excited
And she got the gun.
Boom Boom Boom Boom
Boom Boom Boom Boom
See those bedbugs run.

Onward loyal bedbugs
Marching down the sheet
With their dead and wounded
And poor grandma's feet.

I sing that song as a lullaby sometimes to my friends.

[curi_o]

Ai ya! Oh. Oh.

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Thank you for sharing that lovely image, River. Just, I mean, thank you.

[esclaramonde]

No, thank you.

I mean, if a girl gets to see half-naked Jayne Cobb, then she owes it to the sisterhood to share as best possible.

I'm glad you liked it.

Drakb

[anonymous]

Yah! First time was it? You're braver than I. I just lurk and read. And in this case... drool. Ummmh, such wonderful imagery. What a nice visual to take to bed with me. Many thanks.

Re: Drakb

[esclaramonde]

Well... it sat on the hard-drive for three days. I thought I may have to resort to dutch-courage. Actually, bugger it, I'll have a drink when I get home. Retrospective-like.

I'm so pleased you liked it, thanks for the comment.

And, when my next ficlet gets off the hard drive, you may see River taking that image to bed with her too ;-)

[aikiariyen]

More? Please?

Very good imagery :)

[esclaramonde]

Thank you very much :-D

I am working on the next little snippet now (when my boss isn't around, that is ;-p)

[aikiariyen]

Lol. Sounds good :)

[esclaramonde]

Thank you! I hope it made you feel a little better (without raising your temperature too much).

Kids are so sweet at that age, when they want to share everything with Mummy, including their germs.