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The End, The Middle, The Beginning - Part 9

Jul 28, 2010 00:39

Title: The End, The Middle, The Beginning
Author(s):escapes
Artist: tsarcasm
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't any of this, except the way the words are strung together.. Don't sue.
Characters/Pairings: Nuke
Word Count:
Warnings: none really. Normal nuke angst.
Spoilers:None.
Summary: There are no good guys and no bad buys, just two people trying to rebuild their ( Read more... )

big bang, nuke, writing, te tm tb

Comments 20

Well then...... gtann July 28 2010, 09:43:05 UTC

That was absolutely completely and utterly amazing! I felt every emotion reading this and I loved that!

the_beccaroo July 28 2010, 09:45:30 UTC

God, okay, so I literally devoured this fic. I'm pulling an all-nighter anyway (blah, early traveling) and I was sort of milling around the internet hoping something interesting would happen and then blam you posted and I sort of made this embarrassing squeaking noise. ANYWAY.

I think one of my favorite thing about your writing and especially the way you write the boys is that they fix themselves so well. There's this tangible feeling to them as if you could just sort of reach out and nudge them closer together and they'd just sort of smile sheepishly and hold hands. It's this indescribable sort of wholeness that they have, where you just know they're meant to be with each other.

You hit it so on the head when you talked about Luke becoming this whole, healed soul that was a perfect complement to Noah's whole soul, rather than just halves on their own. You managed to get across exactly what is so epic about Luke and Noah being meant for each other and the difficulty and the absolute beauty of being soulmates ( ... )

aloofly July 28 2010, 12:48:52 UTC

Oh my. I never knew how much I needed to read a fic that happens in this storyline except Luke isn't attracted to Reid and actually acts in a logical, rational way until I read this fic. Every time Luke would come across Noah, I'd get so ridiculously excited before anything would even happen. And that groceries scene! With Luke saying he isn't allowed to help! Oh gosh, that felt like a punch to the gut. But I love how you still incorporated the punch. :D And the kiss afterward was amazing. I just love how you wrote this all as such a realistic process. Great job! :)

cindyls1969 July 28 2010, 13:12:18 UTC

****Cindy sits back, rubbing her hands over face, wiping away tears she didn't know were there. How is it that this was missed by people who were supposed to be professional writers? This angle, this rightness? Cindy sighs and stands up giving Dani the standing ovations she so clearly deserves. Thank god someone has made it right.**** Thanks Dani. I knew it would be amazing.

sln188 July 28 2010, 13:55:33 UTC

Well, you hooked me. I have spent my morning reading your story and I'm not one bit sorry. Work be damned! Can't thank you enough for writing Nuke's story the way it should have been written. Sure they had problems but who doesn't. It is their love that wins out in the end, as it should. Your beautiful story puts the show to shame. Thanks for this and for starting my day on a positive note!!