Divergence: Chapter Forty-Five

Mar 15, 2010 19:36

 Divergence
Author: Escapes 
Rating: Just to be safe, NC 17 
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Spoiler/Warning: Spoilers up through the enlistment story arc and forward/ Warnings: M/M , Language
Disclaimer: Characters belong to ATWT, P&G, CBS, etc. I'm not making money from this, don't sue, etc.

Summary:  This is Luke and Noah’s storyline the way I see it unfolding ( Read more... )

divergence, writing, atwt, fic

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escapes March 17 2010, 18:20:55 UTC
LOL I'm sorry? And you're one to talk!

You're hooked huh? All part of my evil plan. Muahahahaha! Seriously, I'm glad you like it. I'm really happy with how this arc is working out.

I'm going to be posting ever Monday for sure, if i gat a lot of chapters done, I may do random extras, but I'm really trying for every Monday.

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j525 March 16 2010, 00:14:54 UTC
ARRRRRGGGHHHH. My emotions are all over the place with this story. My goodness. Powerfully emotional chapter and can't wait to find out who this mystery person is. this sensible confidant of Luke's. I'm dying here. Yes, out of all the emotional stuff in this chapter that is what I am focused on - shoot me why don't you :)

God, your story gets better and better every chapter and I love this and I don't want it to ever end just keeping writing it for the next ten years. I love this story. I need more though. It's like a drug. I need the next chapter.

(ok, poor Lucinda, poor Luke being her confidant and decision maker and poor Noah not knowing what is going on and good for Noah for going to Josh to discuss sexual issues and Luke. our poor Luke.)

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escapes March 17 2010, 18:26:23 UTC
I'm sorry your emotions are all over the place, but it makes me happy that the story is doing that. Means I'm doing my job right. =)

LOL, you all are going to make me write this forever aren't you? I'm going to hve to go into hiding when I stop writing this. Is there witness protection for writers? I'll hve to look into this. I'm happy with the ways things are working out with the story, so the fact that you think it's getting better and better makes me \o/ all over the place.

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cindyls1969 March 16 2010, 00:15:42 UTC
Oh man, this is killing me. I really want to know who Luke is talking to though. I will be waiting not so patiently for the next episode!

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escapes March 17 2010, 18:33:45 UTC
You'll find out....eventually. =)

Next chapter posted on Monday. I'm going to stick to that for now so everyone knows exactly when it's coming out.

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crownroyal_51 March 16 2010, 00:49:16 UTC
Oh wow! There's so many things going on in this chapter!

I'm happy that Noah wants to explore other sexual avenues with Luke. It's understandable that he's hesitant about bottoming among other things given his past, but it's a good thing that he sought out some professional help so he could try to take the next step.

I'm worried that Luke has to deal with Lucinda's cancer by himself. I know he called in his confidant (I'm still dying to know who it is), but I'm afraid that since he can't talk to Noah this is all going to be misconstrued.

Can't wait for more!

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escapes March 17 2010, 20:07:50 UTC
Yeah, this arc has a lot going on with it. You guys should be in for quite a ride. =)

I agree that it's good Noah talked to Josh about expanding his boundaries sexually. It says something for how he feels about Luke that he's willing to do this and do it right.

You guys are all so curious about who the mystery person is. Good! Means I'm doing something right.

More coming on Monday!

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freakykat March 16 2010, 03:15:14 UTC
You know I love how re-reading this, I pick up on more emotions.

I love everything about this chapter. Most especially, Noah's want to open himself up further to Luke and be the man he wants to be. As well, as Luke and Lucinda's lovely relationship. They are great together.

EEEEEEEEEEEE! LOVE. LOVE. LOVE. LOVE.

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escapes March 17 2010, 20:42:01 UTC
I love that you get more emotions when you reread. Means I'm doing something right and that make me look kinda like your userpic. (which I flove with the passion of a thousand burning suns lol)

Aww, I'm glad you like it! Love me some Luke and Granny Lu, they're awesome together.

Thanks for the EEEEEE, lol.

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