"Things He Knows/Things She Knows" // Bones

Mar 18, 2010 18:51

Title: Things He Knows/Things She Knows
Word Count: 2,668 words
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Bones
Pairing: Booth/Brennan, Booth/Other, Brennan/Hacker
Spoilers: Season 5, up to 5x15
Summary: Based on a prompt by tv_fan_girl from the bitesize_bones hiatus comment fic challenge. Booth has a girlfriend. She and Hacker confront B&B and force them to admit their feelings for one ( Read more... )

character: seeley booth, fandom: bones, pairing: booth/brennan, fic: bones, character: temperance brennan

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erinya March 20 2010, 07:38:26 UTC
Aw, this made me smile. I really liked the way you described the things they know and don't know at the beginning.

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drphungus March 22 2010, 14:45:34 UTC
I'm glad it made you smile! Thanks for the comment on the story!

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tempertemper March 20 2010, 07:52:15 UTC
I love this and really love the infinity reference at the end. ♥

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drphungus March 22 2010, 14:59:53 UTC
The infinity idea really helped me write the last few paragraphs of story, so I'm glad you liked the reference. Thanks!

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hippiebanana132 March 20 2010, 15:06:49 UTC
This is written so beautifully.

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drphungus March 22 2010, 14:59:24 UTC
Aw, thanks! Thank you for commenting! Feedback feeds my writer's soul.

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dianeb_047 March 20 2010, 17:08:29 UTC
Very nice story. You certainly have a way with words. There's a lot of depth and character to your narrative; you've given us a fantastic glimpse into the minds and hearts of Booth and Bones - something they can't do on television. I also enjoyed the references to the night sky and your creativity with them at the end.

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drphungus March 22 2010, 14:48:30 UTC
Thank you for the lovely and detailed feedback! It always means so much that people take the time to respond. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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bantam_shine March 20 2010, 17:12:42 UTC
That was a.ma.zing. Loved the rhythm, your descriptions, Booth & Brennan's dialogue -- everything. Absolute perfection.

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drphungus March 22 2010, 15:02:44 UTC
Wow, thank you for the feedback! This made my day. Thank you, thank you!

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