Gallows [OS]

[erwilde]

Titre: Gallows
Auteur: Erwilde
Rating: R
Genre: Yaoi / OH SO MUCH ANGST I CAN'T EVEN / Vampire
Group: Alice Nine.
Pairing: Tora/Saga
Warning: Happens in the past, when people were still killed before a whole crowd and all
Comment: WELL NO I'M NOT DEAD. I had some time to write it since I'm on vacation right, but not for long <.< I still don't know why it

Comments

[aleksiina_26]

Ohh my god you are BACK!!!! asdfaahdfjklk When I saw you'd written something I spent about 10 minutes rolling around in bed making inhuman noises before I could even read it XD

This was...beautiful! When I started getting the whole idea that its a man's last thoughts as he prepares to die, at the hands of his lover no less, I thought "oh dear l am so gonna be crying at the end of this -___-" But oh my, you gave them a happy ending! :O I was completely shocked in a really awesome way XD That was just amazing and bittersweet, and the sex was really lovely, sparsely written yet you could really feel that passion between them...*sighs* That was gorgeous, like all of your writing really. Good work, seriously, its been a while and you never disappoint :D xoxo

ps. I preposterously friended you because I'm rude like that XD I don't want to miss any more updates ;)

[erwilde]

YES I AM (not for long but.. xD) OMG I'm trying to imagine it and this is just glorious XD *rolls with you xD*

Oh well you know, basically it was going to be an angsty smut between a ninja (Tora) and a person of the high society that he was supposed to protect (Saga) and they would get caught and Tora would be killed because it was forbidden and all, and then it turned out like this is right now. I don't what happened. Because even when I thought "Oh ok so yeah, finally he's a vampire and Saga is going to die, well..." I was really going to kill Saga, But then AGAIN my brain messed with me and I was done with it I was like "... Oh. They're not dead. Ok." XDDD I'm rambling sorry xD
Aaah I'm glad you're thinking that about the sex scene, because I really wanted to convey the feeling that they really loved each other, and that it wasn't just "yeah let's fuck because it's cool", I guess I succeeded then \o/

THANK YOU~~ *jumps everywhere*
(I friended you back because you're just epic XD)

[aleksiina_26]

We can totally roll around together, I have a queen sized bed...XD

The original story sounds totally awesome too, maybe you should write it as well XD That totally happens to me to, I start writing something and it turns into something completely different, but that's ok, I just let my brain be crazy and usually it doesn't turn out too bad lol. And the sex was really lovely and meaningful, it totally worked with the story and didn't seem gratuitous at all.

Thanks for adding me back :D And not being to off-put by my inherent derpiness XD I also write ToraSaga, check it out if you have nothing to do ;D Take care xoxo

[erwilde]

Oh yeeeeesssss *out*

I am afraid to write it now, maybe my brain will troll me again we never know xD Ohoh so that you can understand the surprise each time you finish writing something and it doesn't look like what you wanted XD

Haha don't worry I like you like this 8D xD
Oooh I will, unfunfunf... ÔvÔ

[witch_chameleon]

HI! Do not hesitate for a second reading, he was in need fics of this couple and you write very nice, so do not hesitate. Beginning with the title "Gallows" loved it, that is precisely what creates the situation is triggered, Time management, I also liked very much, as convinaste both times, and the time of execution, that I felt fear, not I wanted that! And I thought that anyway and could not stop, so read on and I could not believe when reading the end, as a breathing apparatus was my heart, why not? Start somewhere else ... THAT CUTE! I loved it!

So I hope soon to read something new from you! I'll be aware. Take care! BYE ~!

[erwilde]

Thank you \o/
Don't worry I never hesitate when it comes to fics! ÔvÔ
Well yeah, I thought that if I gave "Gallows" as the title of the fic, the reader could rapidly understand what was going on in the story :D And the past/present relation wasn't even supposed to happen, but it seems that my brain trolled me once again. Not that it's a bad thing, far from it xD OH I'm glad that the end surprised you! It surprised me too/ZBAAF/

I'll try to write something else when I have time, but I can't promise anything >.

[iscreamboo]

ASDFGHJKL.

That was incredibly sweet of Saga and Tora both. I really didn't expect the twist ending at the end, but all's well that ends well!! I also love how the story is organized; it's like that of a Greek epic, where everything happens in the beginning and you're later informed of previous event before the ending finally smacks you in the face. It really went well with the whole "life flash before your eyes" sort of scenario. :3

[erwilde]

UOAGHODLIA? *out*
Well I wasn't expecting it either to be honest, even if it sounds ridiculous I'm not ashamed to say it xD
Oh really? I don't really know how Greek epics work, it wasn't on purpose so I'll trust your words and feel proud of myself/ZBAAF/ xD

Anyway I'm glad you liked it, thank you! \o/

[fallen_am_i]

MY LITTLE YOU ARE BACK!!!!!!! 8DDDD And this one... <33333333 it was so nice and with bold feelings... I MISSED YOU START WRITING AGAIN!!!!! *hugs tightly and doesn't let go*

[erwilde]

YES I AM BACK -FOR THE MOMENT- 8DDD I WILL WRITE WHENEVER I HAVE THE TIME TO DON'T WORRY *HUGS BACK AND GETS SUFFOCATED* XD

Oh I have to tell you, there is a new pairing wandering in my mind, and my brain doesn't want to let go it seems <.

[fallen_am_i]

OHHHH WHAT PAIRING? :DDDD Be carefull of what you are going to say... >.> (afraid to hear the forbidden words xD) I wanna find a new pairing too, but still i am trying, i'll play though with some pairings on the aliens, when i'll restart it again...

PLEASE STAY MORE HERE, I MISSED YOU SO MUCH DDD8

[erwilde]

Well. You don't know them. It's TaoxKris, two chineses guys xD NO IT'S NOT THE FORBIDDEN PAIRING YOU SEE, I'M NEVER GOING TO WRITE ABOUT THESE TWO DON'T WORRY MY LITTLE XD
Oh yeah I miss your alien fic you know T.T

I WOULD LIKE TO BUT TOMORROW I'LL START SCHOOL AGAIN AND WITH A FULL EXAMS PERIOD IT'S GOING TO BE HORRIBLE OAHOD DD8