Pros Fic: Of 6 Things which Happened In and Around Kitchens, and 2 Things which Technically Didn't

[erushi]

This fic's a very, very, very belated help_haiti fic, written for sc_fossil, who honestly deserves to be nominated for sainthood after all her patience. I hope you like it, K - I sort-of took your prompt and ran away with it.

Of Six Things which Happened In and Around Kitchens, and Two Things which Technically Didn't
(Pros, Bodie/Doyle, NC-17, 2,274 words)

Comments

[sc_fossil]

Oh, oh, this is so beautiful. I love it. I like the first person immediate-ness of it. I like the cooking and the eating and the gravy on the wall! I like that Doyle's undercover as a cook and Bodie's playing piano.

This made me laugh out loud:

“Think you ought to kill yourself, mate,” is what he says. He even manages to sound somewhat pained. “Kitchen like this - the Cow’s trying to tell you something, sunshine. Budget and all that, you know.”

“The living room’s alright.”

“Doyle, your kitchen makes me want to kill myself.”

Reginald! LOL! That made me grin from ear to ear:

(“Should had expected it, mate,” Bodie had said when they toasted the first of his bi-weekly performances with soggy chips held tremulously aloft in greasy fingers that first night. “Bloody poncy name, if you ask me, Reginald.”)

But Bodie is right there, watching Doyle's back. Of course. And when they get together, it's pure music. This bit really made me happy:

It’s a while before the kettle whistles, and when it does overnight plates have been

[erushi]

Oh, I'm so glad it worked for you! It was definitely an honour to write your prompt. Thank you for letting me, and for your lovely comment. ♥

(And you can totally see Bodie call Doyle 'Reggie', or 'Reginald', months after the case. Doyle would, of course, retort with Bodie's mouthful of a full name. And everything would degenerate into playful fistcuffs, with a bit of make-up cuddling after. *g*)

[sc_fossil]

Oh, yes, I can definitely see the teasing. What sweet boys. *g* LOL!

I'm so happy you posted your fic to the comms. It's such a delight and I'm so pleased you've shared it with the class.

Adding: Would you be so kind as to send me a nice text or doc file so I may keep it with all the formatting? Thanks!

[erushi]

Oh, certainly! Which e-mail address should I send it to?

[byslantedlight]

*sighs very, very happily at Erushi-fic* It's been ages! I do like Doyle sliding down down down, and... well, just all the rest of it really... Fic to feel... And thank you sc_fossil for requesting it! *vbg*

[erushi]

It certainly feels like ages since I last wrote Pros! (And I'm sure Doyle liked sliding down, down, down too. *g*)

Thanks for reading, and for your lovely comment!

[shooting2kill]

I read this with sheer delight and it managed to achieve the impossible (well, almost) - making me want to spend more time in my kitchen. Beautiful writing, thank you.

[erushi]

Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment - I truly appreciate it! And I'm of the opinion that there can never be too much time spent in one's kitchen cooking (doing the dishes, on the other hand, will always be far too long), so I'm incredibly chuffed that my fic had that effect. Hee! *g*

[kiwisue]

This is gorgeous. I can see it all, your descriptions are so lush and compelling. Thank you!

[erushi]

Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment. I truly appreciate it!

[biani]

A truly enjoyable read with our lads being all domestic. Loved the steamy sex scenes as well! Thank you for sharing!

[erushi]

The pleasure was mine. Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment! I love the lads being domestic too, and as for the steamy sex, well, hee!