Comments | erinlier004: Legend of the Mord'Sith: Deception

erinlier004

Legend of the Mord'Sith: Deception - Chapter 6 (2/2)

Jul 08, 2012 14:21

Pairing: Cara/Kahlan

Rating: M

Word Count: 4100/8500

Author: Mistresserin

Part Two

Cara didn’t put up a fight when Kahlan helped her get off her horse or when she helped lower her to the ground to sit with her back against an old tree, or even when Kahlan fussed over her and dropped a blanket over her shoulders to keep her warm against the sudden ( Read more... )

mord'sith, cara/kahlan, lots, femslash, kahlan/cara

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mrswoman July 8 2012, 15:20:16 UTC

Oh, still loving this. You are painting a wonderful picture of a developing C/K relationship as the K/R relationship deteriorates. And angry Richard, wow!

Just looking forward now to seeing Kahlan get he revenge on Richard for hurting 'her' Mord'sith, not 'his', hers :)

whisperedname July 8 2012, 16:13:05 UTC

Richard Cypher-Rahl is about to get spanked.......
:D :D :D
P.S. Cara's memory coming back???

cara_cersei July 8 2012, 16:44:55 UTC

Another brilliant update! Can't wait for more!

I love the way your slowly building Cara and Kahlan's relationship, it's really beautiful. And finally Richard has shown his true colours and Kahlan is in he Con Dar. I cant wait to see her get Richard back- should be awsome. Though you are cruel for keeping us waiting now we know she's in the Con Dar.

Thanks for sharing :)

escapay July 8 2012, 16:57:24 UTC

Its the Con'Dar!! We're all gonna die!!

chickinwhite July 8 2012, 17:01:47 UTC

LOL! You just made me laugh...

erinlier004 July 8 2012, 22:26:57 UTC

LOL!! I hope not! I need to finish this...

chickinwhite July 8 2012, 17:00:56 UTC

Oh WOW! That was really intense!!
So many things that are awesome in this chapter.One of them being Cara, more and more opening to Kahlan, though still fighting against it... I love how you describe her changing, her struggles are almost palpable.
And Kahlan? It´s adorable how she cares for her... friend...!Every moment I find myself on the edge of my seat, just waiting for that tiny drop to fall and bring them together.
And, yes, despite he becoming a Rahl-monster, I truly love the way you have Richard here. It is thrilling to watch how he is getting eaten away by his jealousy, and that peculiar moment when Kahlan catches this strange glint in his eyes and acknowledges that "Whoever this person was, he wasn’t the kind and sweet woods guide she was proud to call a friend. This was someone else entirely different, someone that might have already killed Richard Cypher and taken over as Richard Rahl"
hats off, dear! This is very very awesome!