Legend of the Mord'Sith: Deception - Chapter 4

[erinlier004]

Pairing: Cara/Kahlan
Rating: M
Word Count: 7100
Author: Mistresserin
Beta: Fifi
Author’s Note: See chapter one for disclaimers. Once again, thank you so much for all your comments. They keep me wanting to write more and more! J

Chapter Four

Breathe in, breathe out.
Cara concentrated on keeping her breathing steady, her eyes closed and her

Comments

[slashpony]

OMG, Richard is going to be lucky if Kahlan doesn't enter into Con Dar if she finds out what he's done to Cara! Can't wait for the next chapter.

[chaniliet]

Can't wait for Kahlan to finally go Con Dar on his ass!!! He's actually worse than Darken.. I already wasn't a fan of his character in the show, that's not helping :) please tell me you'll have him tortured slowly to a inch of his life before doing it again, pretty please :)

[julz_t]

Kahlan needs to beat some senses into Richard! Con'dar his ass or something. He is being the most insufferable asshole in the entire midlands... *sigh* Poor Cara baby, I love how she puts on a defiance face and go all mistress Cara when facing Richard but let Kahlan helps and takes care of her.
looking forward to reading more.

[cara_cersei]

OMG- great update. I can't believe Richard! Please say Cara tells Kahlan and she goes all ConDar on Richard! That slimy bastard deserves it! You've done a great job o making him into such an unlovable character so quickly and I love the relationship building with Kahlan and Cara. Really enjoying this- please update ASAP!

[snagam80]

This is more than a 'full course meal' I first compared your story to... this is a 'Feast'! It's Delicious and I'm looking forward to becoming quite fat when the feeding is all said and done! ;^P