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Inaugural Fic: Erica Leaves 1/1

Mar 08, 2009 09:29

Title: Erica Leaves
Author: reefermadniss
Rating: G
Summary: Erica takes the first steps
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rating:g, fanfic:erica hahn, art:fanfiction, writer:reefermadniss

Comments 22

hahnsrockstar March 8 2009, 14:05:14 UTC

There's a misspelling. Where it says ~end~, it should say ...to be continued. *nods*

Congratulations on posting the first fic in the new comm.

reefermadniss March 8 2009, 14:14:25 UTC

LOL!
I wondered about that.
Thanks for commenting.

krizzzie March 8 2009, 14:52:29 UTC

I really love the idea of Erica focusing on the journey instead of the destination because I always thought she was so restless and determined in everything she did and her taking a step back and enjoying the "here and now" is something I'd like to see Erica doing.

And her noticing that the woman had no wedding ring was probably my favorite line of a very well written fic. I love your style, the "text-flow" and I agree with hahnsrockstar - it should be "to be continued".

reefermadniss March 8 2009, 15:08:19 UTC

I had hoped this would lay a foundation for other writers to explore the changes that the SGH experience wrought on Erica. And this is just my perspective.

I've actually cheated myself, because this was one ending I was considering for "Home Again". But it fit perfectly with the new community, so I elected to "spend" it here.

This was hard to write because I had to move Erica along to a certain point yet leave things utterly ambiguous, and because of the time pressure to be the first fic.

krizzzie March 8 2009, 15:38:55 UTC

I had hoped this would lay a foundation for other writers to explore the changes that the SGH experience wrought on Erica. And this is just my perspective.

I have to agree with Julie, this was very thoughtful and a great starting point with a lot of potential for more to come.

I've actually cheated myself, because this was one ending I was considering for "Home Again".

Does that mean I won't get a happy Erica/Lauren ending? Not that I would mind Erica/Larissa happeing...

reefermadniss March 8 2009, 15:48:44 UTC

I don't know about the happy ending, but they're going to have a LOT of fun discovering all the different kinds of leaves Erica can now see . . .

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reefermadniss March 8 2009, 15:46:07 UTC

Yes, but first I have to pry Erica out of Hanks County, Ohio, where she's working as an ER doc and lusting after the police chief . . .

reddirtgirl March 8 2009, 16:26:51 UTC

What a great opening fic. It's so refreshing and positive. I have to agree with hahnsrockstar about the "end" part it's so reading wrong lol :D

thank you! hot_4_hahn March 8 2009, 17:55:32 UTC

reefer, thank you for the first fic, and a smart little vignette at that.

I like the idea of Erica relaxing to enjoy the ride, instead of being so driven towards the destination. And the touch of her looking for a wedding band, ~brilliant~.

I really enjoyed this little fic, but must say that I agree with hahnsrockstar. 'Home Again' first, right?