Title: Careful
Author: Pagespan
Characters: Erica and Callie
Rating: PG
Callie_Erica Fanfic Exchange gift for serenitymeimei
Summary: Erica reflects on some advice given to her by a friend.
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Thank you! ♥
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I enjoyed thinking about our two again (and enjoyed reading your lovely piece set during this same time period). Siiiiigh. Those were the days.
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Ok. Now a more specific reaction to the fic :) Since this isn't exactly a happy dance ficcie!
Ooooh. I just loved it. I loved that it was Erica-centered. Her disequilibrium throwing her off was just wonderful. You have a great economy of language. And I loved that Erica didn't have no friends, instead she just has a few that are really good ones. It was awesome to look into Erica heading into the storm of understanding.
And I loved the interplay between herself and Jules. Oyster bar indeed and each knowing that the other wasn't there, but it would be good times. I also loved how she chided her about the rankings.
Sigh. Oh. The times when it was just beginning and we could really begin to get behind them.
Lovely. Thank you for this.
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You definitely should continue this. I really want to know how you unfold their story. Your writing has a beautiful flow that draws me in and makes me want more.
Great!
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