Careful (Exchange gift for serenitymeimei)

Jan 13, 2011 15:47

Title: Careful
Author: Pagespan
Characters: Erica and Callie
Rating: PG
Callie_Erica Fanfic Exchange gift for serenitymeimei

Summary: Erica reflects on some advice given to her by a friend.

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art:fanfic, fanfic:callie/erica, comm:event

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serenitymeimei January 14 2011, 00:07:06 UTC
This was so gorgeously written! Seriously. I couldn't have asked for a better exchange fic. You took my prompt and made it something angsty and introspective, far beyond anything that I could've hoped for, and I absolutely loved it!

Thank you! ♥

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pagespan January 14 2011, 00:25:09 UTC
Hi Serenity,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I enjoyed thinking about our two again (and enjoyed reading your lovely piece set during this same time period). Siiiiigh. Those were the days.

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serenitymeimei January 14 2011, 01:00:01 UTC
Aw, thank you! I really enjoyed falling in love with Callica all over again. Those really were the good old days..

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punky_96 January 14 2011, 00:34:46 UTC
Does a little dance! The next in the exchange to post.... Squee.

Ok. Now a more specific reaction to the fic :) Since this isn't exactly a happy dance ficcie!

Ooooh. I just loved it. I loved that it was Erica-centered. Her disequilibrium throwing her off was just wonderful. You have a great economy of language. And I loved that Erica didn't have no friends, instead she just has a few that are really good ones. It was awesome to look into Erica heading into the storm of understanding.

And I loved the interplay between herself and Jules. Oyster bar indeed and each knowing that the other wasn't there, but it would be good times. I also loved how she chided her about the rankings.

Sigh. Oh. The times when it was just beginning and we could really begin to get behind them.

Lovely. Thank you for this.

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politicalfemme January 14 2011, 15:30:50 UTC
This was great! It's been so long since good Callica fic has been posted. Thanks to Punky for getting everyone going again!

You definitely should continue this. I really want to know how you unfold their story. Your writing has a beautiful flow that draws me in and makes me want more.

Great!

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avenavs January 14 2011, 16:14:09 UTC
OMG this is so brilliant. Erica needs a little pushing to know who she really is. :>

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reddirtgirl January 14 2011, 19:01:44 UTC
This such a great little fic. Sometimes all it takes is a gentle nudge in the right direction, or just a pushy friend. So sweet to remember the good days at the beginning...

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