Yrhes Original Fic First Post

[erfan_starled]

“Some nasty bruises.  No more of that Ronal.  He’s had enough.  That’s an order, and you’ll be sorry if you forget it.”  A heavy silence.

“You’ll be sorry when he gives you trouble.  You’ll have to restrain him if you’re not going to keep him down with a proper beating.”

“What do you call what you’ve given him?”  No answer.  Some of the figures

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[chaotic_binky]

I am going to save this for three nights time when I will have finished work.

Hugs Binky xxxx

[erfan_starled]

Oh, I was hoping no-one would read it... I am having a rather strange time and posting this is a reaction I think. Defiance of some kind. Thanks for taking a look. Any suggestions for how to space out the posts?

[chaotic_binky]

I tend to flood everyone with my posts but if I had self restraint I would wait several days in between each one. Long enough to think and ruminate upon it but not long enough to forget.

Looking forward to reading it.

Hugs Binky xxxxx

[erfan_starled]

Thank you kindly!

[erviniae]

Okay, I desperately want to know about this "land soldier" and why he lost his memory and who he is.

And this Yrhes seems like a man who not only commands respect but also is well-liked.

I'm pulled in.... :)
*hugs*

Of course, I was hoping that when he was nekkie....I can't help it! :P

[erfan_starled]

Heya - well, thank you. I like these two, and when I asked someone to read, I was surprised to find that they felt questions did get answered. Yrhes is those things, without doubt. You will discover all about the other for sure. My assessment of the fic is indulgent, long, plot is there for effect not because it is a good plot, but as a vehicle for the characters. I am fond of this fic. *g* I like the ship.

[erviniae]

The wonderful thing about a ship--there is nowhere to go to get away from someone...without jumping, of course! :P

[nikkiling2]

Very, very intriguing. I'm glad you decided to post this, and I can't wait to read more. I have so many questions that I know will just have to wait... :D

[erfan_starled]

Thank you. I need to settle on a posting gap. ?

[nikkiling2]

Mmmmm... love the icon. Beautiful form

[erfan_starled]

Someone said three or four days, and putting that with the regular twice, I'll do Friday and Tuesday then. Thanks - no I don't think you think too much I did ask and this was an issue that other people brought up with me, not the other way round. (Finished, yes.) Thanks for contributing, that decisions made then :) Bye now. Oh, icon, thank you, I'll look out the site ref -
http://www.x-posed.co.uk/main.html - limnoreia's corset is on here, adopted by some, lovely too. And this one. Enjoy.

[chaotic_binky]

This is extremely good.

I love the detail and the mystery. So many questions posed and all needing an answer.

Off to read more.

Hugs Binky xxxxx

[erfan_starled]

Thank you for this; I appreciate comments, whether or not they are this glowing. I'm feel pleased to have it read. Curious. Of course, you liking it is a major bonus :) I am a bit non-plussed with Yrhes having readers. I showed it to a friend first. I can see some of the flaws, but found it easy to come back to while writing it. There was a momentum to it. Unlike some fics I could mention :|

[erfan_starled]

I'm glad to share this with you. I am fond of Yrhes. It was an enormous adventure to post it.