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Sep 18, 2004 17:44

An Unfortunate Seduction
HARRY POTTER ; DM/HP, HP/ZS ; R (drug use, language)
For the Two Lines challenge.

( Downtown baby it's a million to one. You might as well name your poison. )

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erb_ September 19 2004, 09:56:37 UTC

And thank you SOOOO much for betaing even though you HATEHATEHATE the main character! <333

DOUBLE SEIZURES?! :O WOWA.

:"> ♥ !!!!

jadarene September 18 2004, 16:59:30 UTC

Wow, what a really unique story. Quite unlike anything I've read for quite some time. Great job!

erb_ September 19 2004, 09:58:13 UTC

That's such a great compliment! :D
I'm not actually fond AT ALL of the h/d ship, but it worked for the plotline, so I'm glad I could write something with a little twist in it.

Thanks a bunch! <33

come_on_live September 18 2004, 17:12:43 UTC

i just love your preoccupation with drugs! it's so amusing to me, but you write the scenes (and the grit) like you've seen it. your style is so ... unique.

and that icon of the comment right above mine scares me. Xp

erb_ September 19 2004, 09:59:10 UTC

Bahaha, I know, right? And yeah... I think I just have an internal druggie, telling me what to write. ;)

And D: at your icon.
It's oovvveerrrr.

sugareey September 18 2004, 20:06:46 UTC

interesting...hehehe =P the drugs are really worked in well...muhahahaha

erb_ September 19 2004, 09:59:30 UTC

Thanks! :)
<3

longleggedgit September 18 2004, 23:09:57 UTC

Wow. This is crazy unique. I've read enough fan-fiction in my day to make my eyes bleed, but never something quite like this. Very original, somewhat disturbing . . . I take that back, really disturbing, but very well-done. Kind of a Harry Potter / Trainspotting type setting. Anyway, nice job. =)

erb_ September 19 2004, 10:03:06 UTC

It's funny you use that icon, because a section I left out of the story talked about Harry going for the better of two evils (Draco) because the better possesses the worse of the two (cocaine) and that's what Harry wants. If that makes any sense. You can see why I left it out. ;)

And thank you SO much. Like I told jadarene, I'm not a fan of the H/D ship (but it worked for the plot), so I'm really glad I could twist it up and give you something new. That means so much to me.

Thanks again! <333

longleggedgit September 19 2004, 18:13:17 UTC

Oh you're so welcome. =)
That is funny that you originally had a lesser of two evils thing. I don't quite understand what you meant, heh, but I probably would've in context. XD
I'm pretty big on H/D myself, but it's cool that you can write it without even being very into it. Shows a lot of skill. =D