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Stagnant - harry potter - ron/zacharias - pg-13

Aug 28, 2004 00:42

Stagnant
HARRY POTTER ; RON/ZACHARIAS ; PG-13 (language)

( Sometimes, a lot of times, Ron closes himself up. )

Comments 16

_riz August 27 2004, 22:28:23 UTC

Mmmm, Ron...

I love the elipses bit. ::punctuation geek::

erb_ August 28 2004, 13:34:26 UTC

thank you! :D

i thought you would. ;)

l0rn August 28 2004, 07:24:51 UTC

omgomgomg don't worry about the prompt! holy hell. aldkjf. i can't even begin. typing doesn't convey the feeling of the words i want to say, and i really, i mean, words! they don't! i just!

*throws hands up, looks at you in awe, reads story again*

erb_ August 28 2004, 13:37:25 UTC

jfenkjriae;rkjj *falls over*
thank you soooooo muuchh.

i was really afraid you wouldn't like it, or that you'd think it was too pretentious. (sp?) but you like eet? you rilly, rilly, like eet? :DDD

now, about this george/harry/fred... ;)
(almost typed in greg/harry/fred. eeeew.)

thewatch August 28 2004, 07:28:14 UTC

I love this, I think Ron is underportrayed in many stories, but once he gets past the awkward defensiveness he keeps he does notivce things.

I think you've done Ron really well in this, and Zacharias for that matter. I like his POV very much.

Great stuff.

erb_ August 28 2004, 13:39:43 UTC

i think ron notices quite a bit more than anyone gives him credit for. i think even harry "dunces ron up" a bit, considering we've only ever seen him through harry's perspective.

and thank you so much. that really means a lot to me, as this was my first time really writing ron. and he's such a touchy character, i was afraid i'd just screwed him over completely. :\

but i didn't, so phew.
i can breathe now. ;P

thanks again. <333

_gnosis August 28 2004, 09:23:47 UTC

god, this is so brilliant.
this is probably one of--if not THE--best thing you've written.

(i'm going to rec it later with a better review. <3)

erb_ August 28 2004, 13:40:36 UTC

O_O.
well... thank you.
<3!

frolics August 28 2004, 15:39:20 UTC

“You’re like-like one of those, those what are they called? Those three dot things-“

“Ellipses?”

“Yes.” Ron paused to lick his lips and scratch his nose. “Thank you.”

I hope <3333333333 will be a sufficient review because I am currently in awe and therefore incoherent.

erb_ August 28 2004, 17:46:28 UTC

i'm sorry, but i require all friends to write at LEAST 500 words in response.
;)

<33333