When blindly reaching for each other, they suddenly remembered...
Title: When blindly reaching for each other, they suddenly remembered the unbearable lightness of being...
Original author: takumi aka mystxdeathangel
Original text: mystxdeathangel.livejournal.com/54201.html
Erased by: Eve aka
iced_eowyn
Fandom: X Japan
...
One thing was certain, hide didn’t know how many drinks it had taken before he found himself on top of the bar and how all eyes were focused on him. And well he didn’t care to find out . . . at the moment anyway. He made a gesture over to the DJ, making absolute certain that all of X was watching.
The music started with a steady stream of drums and hide swayed his hips, moving them to the beat, he took a few test steps, to judge how drunk he really was. He strode across the bar top, hips still swaying as went. He stopped when he was at the center, gripping the edge of the wood shelf above his head, he dipped his hips before rising back up. He allowed himself a small smirk as he traveled his hands up his shirt, revealing only the slightest bit of skin. He then ran a hand up his thigh, slowly moving his shirt up a bit more before quickly dropping it. His brain was telling him it was wrong but he didn’t care. He parted his lips, his heavy lidded eyes, wandered over the crowd, and he hopped off the bar top, his boots hitting with a loud thud.
The guitarist trailed a hand over the bar top, gradually making his way over to where Heath was sitting. He slid the bassist’s hand around his waist as he settled into his lap, leaning back against him. He felt the bassist trail his hands inside hide’s shirt, brushing against the guitartist’s clothed nipples. hide wiggled experimentally in his lap, and was rewarded with a gasp. “I will get you back for this.” He whispered as he tilted his head back to lick at Heath’s neck, sucking on the skin. The arms around him moved down to his waist tightening a little. But the guitarist smirked, wiggling again as he bit down on his neck, slipping out of the other’s arms as soon as they loosened. hide chuckled as he left the bassist with grasping at air, a gaping look on his face.
And now that he was enjoying this, well he didn’t have any intention to stop, none whatsoever. He paused in front of a mildly startled Pata, who looked back at Heath before looking at hide. The other guitarist reached up as the tempo picked up and hide licked at his lips, pushing the other back down. He slid his hand up Pata’s thigh, trailing his fingers slowly over the rough fabric of the jeans, gently over his crotch, up his chest and neck to wrap his finger around his chin, reveling in the little gasps as he went. He gazed into his fellow guitarist’s eyes before leaning down to capture his lips in a deep kiss, reaching his hand to move the hair and exposed Pata’s neck. hide licked his tongue over his lips, giving Pata’s a quick lick before moving to nibble down his jaw line and down his neck, trying not to leave any really visible marks. He felt Pata’s hands reach for his pants unbuttoning them, but that was as far as he got as hide was gone again, leaving Pata grasping at air as well.
(...)
The predatory smirk on hide’s face said everything, he was having a ball, and oh no he wasn’t quite done yet. He moved to where Toshi was sitting, moving his hand up the vocalist’s chest, unbuttoning his already open leather jacket to Toshi’s clear amusement. He was enjoying this just as much probably. The guitarist moved his hand up to cup the vocalist’s chin, nibbling down his neck, and then he was sitting in Toshi’s lap, straddling the younger’s hips. He nipped gently at the skin on his neck, moving downward, to hi nipples. hide felt the vocalist’s hands grasp his hips, he smirked lightly before leaning down to take a nipple into his mouth, swirling his tongue around it, nipping and suckling it. He could hear Toshi’s breath as it hissed out against his neck. He made a vibrating noise with his mouth as the vocalist’s breath left him in little pants. The guitarist dipped his hand down to give him a deft stroke through his leather pants before hopping off his lap. hide blinked as with a tug he found himself back on Toshi’s lap, his lips brushing against the others. The smirk on hide’s face reappeared and he dipped his hand to unbutton the other’s pants before rolling his hips, leaving the vocalist gasping. “I wanna hear you scream and shout.” He whispered against Toshi’s ear, reaching down to stroke him again, receiving a small moan from the vocalist before he slipped off his lap once more.
Lastly he turned to Yoshiki who had been watching this all with wide eyes. A chuckle left hide’s lips as he walked until he was positioned behind the drummer, he rested his head in the crook of his neck, he nibbled on the soft skin as Yoshiki tilted his head to the side, giving him more access. The guitarist moved his hands down to caress some of Yoshiki’s skin, receiving a gasp from the other. He nipped a path down from the ear down, biting a little hard at the nape of his neck, licking his tongue soothingly over the bite as the drummer let out another gasp, little louder this time. He brushed his hands down Yoshiki’s sides, before moving across his thighs and gently over his crotch, the other moved his hips up into his hand. “I’ve got another confession, I fell to temptation, and there is no question there is some connection, gotta follow my heart.” hide whispered into his ear along with the lyrics as he moved in front of him, sliding into Yoshiki’s lap. He ran his fingers over the drummer’s lips, leaning close so their lips were almost touching before moving away teasingly. He ran his hands down his chest and when he reached Yoshiki’s crotch, the other held his hands there. hide could feel the blood surge under his hands and he gently squeezed, and Yoshiki groaned, hide watching as his eyes narrowed to slits. The drummer thrust up into his hand as he applied more and more pressure, continuing his massaging. He swiped his tongue over Yoshiki’s lips as he smirked at the pleasure building up until he finally released and the drummer sagged some in his chair. hide moved off his lap, with the full intention of getting more drinks but was pulled back into the other’s lap, his back to his chest. “So naughty tonight hide-chan.” He purred, tightening his hold so that the guitarist just sat back, letting out a little laugh.
The sighs and groans around the bar made hide smirk from his snug spot on Yoshiki’s lap. “And you’re the one who’s supposed to drive me mad.” He remarked with a chuckle.
(...)
Yoshiki rolled them over so that he was on top of hide. He grazed his fingers over hide nipples, drawing a small groan from the smaller man. hide opened his mouth to say something, but quickly closed his mouth again as the drummer rolled his hand over a nipple, pinching gently, watching as the guitartist, tilted his head back, breath leaving his mouth in a hiss. He moved over to the other nipple, drawing it into his mouth, sucking deeply before running his tongue over it slowly. “Ah..that’s...” hide’s sentence was cut off by a small moan, thrusting his hips up into Yoshiki’s. The drummer bit down on the nipple in his mouth, soothing it over as hide let out a whimpered moan.
He moved away from his chest, downward to dip his tongue into his navel, nipping at it, reaching down to grasp hold of hide’s pants, moving them down, underwear and all, throwing them back, somewhere. He poised over the older man’s erection, pausing. “Please.” He looked up at hide as he heard the small plea, before licking a bit of pre-cum that had developed away. Yoshiki held the guitarist’s hips down as he engulfed him into his mouth, ignoring his whimpers as he tried to thrust up into his mouth. He slowly swirled his tongue around the tip of the other man’s erection, teasing him. Plunging the tip of his tongue into the tiny slit at the head and felt hide’s hands grip in his hair. Without warning he pulled back to hear a loud whimper of protest from the guitarist.
hide stared up at him, watching as Yoshiki leaned down and claimed his lips in a rough kiss, nipping at the other’s lips as the smaller parted them with a whimper. He plunged his tongue in, swirling his tongue around the other’s. They parted, panting for air and Yoshiki moved two fingers up to hide’s lips, watching as the other took them into his mouth, coating them with saliva. hide’s eyes floated closed as Yoshiki withdrew his hand, sliding the fingers gently past the tight ring of muscle at hide’s entrance. The guitarist rocked down on those fingers as his hands tightened their grip in Yoshiki’s long blonde hair. He moved his fingers around, scissoring hide as he tensed up, spreading his legs wider. A loud groan escaped the shorter man’s lips as Yoshiki brushed against the his prostate with his fingers again, listening as hide started making little mewling sounds. He watched as the guitarist, arched his hips up, squirming under his ministrations. “More . . . ” He could have sworn he heard the word spoken in the guitarist’s nearly inaudible voice.
He obliged the request, thrusting into the sweet spot harder, watching as hide squirmed in pleasure under him, breath coming out in short gasps. He removed his fingers as hide’s eyes opened to regard him. He pressed himself against the other’s entrance, watching hide tense up a little, and he entered him slowly. He paused when he was all the way inside and the guitartist’s legs wrapped around him. “Move.” The single word left hide’s voice as he watched Yoshiki with heavy lidded eyes.
The drummer let out a little growl and moved back until he was barely inside the other man, thrusting back into him almost agonizingly slow, receiving a groan from hide as he hit his prostate. The guitarist tightened his legs around the other man, silently urging him to move faster. Yoshiki picked up the pace, letting out his own groan as he could feel the other’s inner muscles tighten around him. He increased his pace, thrusting into hide’s sweet spot almost relentlessly, reaching down to stroke at the other’s cock, in time to the thrusts. He felt the other’s muscles tighten as he convulsed around him and hide came violently into his hand. With a few more thrusts Yoshiki found himself over the edge, coming inside hide not long after.
Yoshiki leaned up to leave a kiss on hide’s lips before pulling out slowly, laying down beside hide, drawing the shorter into his arms. “Ya know, all you had to do was ask.” he swatted at hide for the comment, closing his eyes.
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...and my erasure:
When blindly reaching for each other, they suddenly remembered the unbearable lightness of being...
One thing was certain: the moment.
A gesture.
Moving. Swaying. Gripping the edge of the wood shelf.
The slightest bit of skin.
A gasp...
(...slipping out of other's hands as soon as they loosened...)
He didn't have any intention to stop.
He looked back,
(...trailing his fingers slowly over the rough fabric of his chest...)
reaching his hand to move over his lips,
(...trying not to leave any really visible marks...)
grasping at air as well.
Chin.
Neck.
Hips.
Breath.
His lips brushing against the others, reaching down...
A small moan...
(...once more...)
Watching.
Caress some of skin.
Receiving a gasp from the other.
(...there is no question there is some connection...)
Leaning close so their lips were almost touching before moving away teasingly.
The pleasure.
A little laugh.
A whimpered moan: "Please."
A rough kiss.
Thrusting back, urging him to move faster.
(...More...)
...
A/N: Okay: now I feel embarrassed quite a lot. But in a funny and somehow nice way. After reading all your beautiful entries... look what I've written. Erotic stuff. Although I intentionally didn't plan to. I guess the original story is to blame.
But I had fun. And I hope you had at least some, too.
And yes: I've cheated a bit when using (...More...) a few paragraphs later. I hope it's allowed. Anyway...it was my first time "erasing" someone's fic and it was a lot of fun. I'll be glad of joining next time.
Original author: takumi aka mystxdeathangel
Original text: mystxdeathangel.livejournal.com/54201.html
Erased by: Eve aka
iced_eowyn
Fandom: X Japan
...
One thing was certain, hide didn’t know how many drinks it had taken before he found himself on top of the bar and how all eyes were focused on him. And well he didn’t care to find out . . . at the moment anyway. He made a gesture over to the DJ, making absolute certain that all of X was watching.
The music started with a steady stream of drums and hide swayed his hips, moving them to the beat, he took a few test steps, to judge how drunk he really was. He strode across the bar top, hips still swaying as went. He stopped when he was at the center, gripping the edge of the wood shelf above his head, he dipped his hips before rising back up. He allowed himself a small smirk as he traveled his hands up his shirt, revealing only the slightest bit of skin. He then ran a hand up his thigh, slowly moving his shirt up a bit more before quickly dropping it. His brain was telling him it was wrong but he didn’t care. He parted his lips, his heavy lidded eyes, wandered over the crowd, and he hopped off the bar top, his boots hitting with a loud thud.
The guitarist trailed a hand over the bar top, gradually making his way over to where Heath was sitting. He slid the bassist’s hand around his waist as he settled into his lap, leaning back against him. He felt the bassist trail his hands inside hide’s shirt, brushing against the guitartist’s clothed nipples. hide wiggled experimentally in his lap, and was rewarded with a gasp. “I will get you back for this.” He whispered as he tilted his head back to lick at Heath’s neck, sucking on the skin. The arms around him moved down to his waist tightening a little. But the guitarist smirked, wiggling again as he bit down on his neck, slipping out of the other’s arms as soon as they loosened. hide chuckled as he left the bassist with grasping at air, a gaping look on his face.
And now that he was enjoying this, well he didn’t have any intention to stop, none whatsoever. He paused in front of a mildly startled Pata, who looked back at Heath before looking at hide. The other guitarist reached up as the tempo picked up and hide licked at his lips, pushing the other back down. He slid his hand up Pata’s thigh, trailing his fingers slowly over the rough fabric of the jeans, gently over his crotch, up his chest and neck to wrap his finger around his chin, reveling in the little gasps as he went. He gazed into his fellow guitarist’s eyes before leaning down to capture his lips in a deep kiss, reaching his hand to move the hair and exposed Pata’s neck. hide licked his tongue over his lips, giving Pata’s a quick lick before moving to nibble down his jaw line and down his neck, trying not to leave any really visible marks. He felt Pata’s hands reach for his pants unbuttoning them, but that was as far as he got as hide was gone again, leaving Pata grasping at air as well.
(...)
The predatory smirk on hide’s face said everything, he was having a ball, and oh no he wasn’t quite done yet. He moved to where Toshi was sitting, moving his hand up the vocalist’s chest, unbuttoning his already open leather jacket to Toshi’s clear amusement. He was enjoying this just as much probably. The guitarist moved his hand up to cup the vocalist’s chin, nibbling down his neck, and then he was sitting in Toshi’s lap, straddling the younger’s hips. He nipped gently at the skin on his neck, moving downward, to hi nipples. hide felt the vocalist’s hands grasp his hips, he smirked lightly before leaning down to take a nipple into his mouth, swirling his tongue around it, nipping and suckling it. He could hear Toshi’s breath as it hissed out against his neck. He made a vibrating noise with his mouth as the vocalist’s breath left him in little pants. The guitarist dipped his hand down to give him a deft stroke through his leather pants before hopping off his lap. hide blinked as with a tug he found himself back on Toshi’s lap, his lips brushing against the others. The smirk on hide’s face reappeared and he dipped his hand to unbutton the other’s pants before rolling his hips, leaving the vocalist gasping. “I wanna hear you scream and shout.” He whispered against Toshi’s ear, reaching down to stroke him again, receiving a small moan from the vocalist before he slipped off his lap once more.
Lastly he turned to Yoshiki who had been watching this all with wide eyes. A chuckle left hide’s lips as he walked until he was positioned behind the drummer, he rested his head in the crook of his neck, he nibbled on the soft skin as Yoshiki tilted his head to the side, giving him more access. The guitarist moved his hands down to caress some of Yoshiki’s skin, receiving a gasp from the other. He nipped a path down from the ear down, biting a little hard at the nape of his neck, licking his tongue soothingly over the bite as the drummer let out another gasp, little louder this time. He brushed his hands down Yoshiki’s sides, before moving across his thighs and gently over his crotch, the other moved his hips up into his hand. “I’ve got another confession, I fell to temptation, and there is no question there is some connection, gotta follow my heart.” hide whispered into his ear along with the lyrics as he moved in front of him, sliding into Yoshiki’s lap. He ran his fingers over the drummer’s lips, leaning close so their lips were almost touching before moving away teasingly. He ran his hands down his chest and when he reached Yoshiki’s crotch, the other held his hands there. hide could feel the blood surge under his hands and he gently squeezed, and Yoshiki groaned, hide watching as his eyes narrowed to slits. The drummer thrust up into his hand as he applied more and more pressure, continuing his massaging. He swiped his tongue over Yoshiki’s lips as he smirked at the pleasure building up until he finally released and the drummer sagged some in his chair. hide moved off his lap, with the full intention of getting more drinks but was pulled back into the other’s lap, his back to his chest. “So naughty tonight hide-chan.” He purred, tightening his hold so that the guitarist just sat back, letting out a little laugh.
The sighs and groans around the bar made hide smirk from his snug spot on Yoshiki’s lap. “And you’re the one who’s supposed to drive me mad.” He remarked with a chuckle.
(...)
Yoshiki rolled them over so that he was on top of hide. He grazed his fingers over hide nipples, drawing a small groan from the smaller man. hide opened his mouth to say something, but quickly closed his mouth again as the drummer rolled his hand over a nipple, pinching gently, watching as the guitartist, tilted his head back, breath leaving his mouth in a hiss. He moved over to the other nipple, drawing it into his mouth, sucking deeply before running his tongue over it slowly. “Ah..that’s...” hide’s sentence was cut off by a small moan, thrusting his hips up into Yoshiki’s. The drummer bit down on the nipple in his mouth, soothing it over as hide let out a whimpered moan.
He moved away from his chest, downward to dip his tongue into his navel, nipping at it, reaching down to grasp hold of hide’s pants, moving them down, underwear and all, throwing them back, somewhere. He poised over the older man’s erection, pausing. “Please.” He looked up at hide as he heard the small plea, before licking a bit of pre-cum that had developed away. Yoshiki held the guitarist’s hips down as he engulfed him into his mouth, ignoring his whimpers as he tried to thrust up into his mouth. He slowly swirled his tongue around the tip of the other man’s erection, teasing him. Plunging the tip of his tongue into the tiny slit at the head and felt hide’s hands grip in his hair. Without warning he pulled back to hear a loud whimper of protest from the guitarist.
hide stared up at him, watching as Yoshiki leaned down and claimed his lips in a rough kiss, nipping at the other’s lips as the smaller parted them with a whimper. He plunged his tongue in, swirling his tongue around the other’s. They parted, panting for air and Yoshiki moved two fingers up to hide’s lips, watching as the other took them into his mouth, coating them with saliva. hide’s eyes floated closed as Yoshiki withdrew his hand, sliding the fingers gently past the tight ring of muscle at hide’s entrance. The guitarist rocked down on those fingers as his hands tightened their grip in Yoshiki’s long blonde hair. He moved his fingers around, scissoring hide as he tensed up, spreading his legs wider. A loud groan escaped the shorter man’s lips as Yoshiki brushed against the his prostate with his fingers again, listening as hide started making little mewling sounds. He watched as the guitarist, arched his hips up, squirming under his ministrations. “More . . . ” He could have sworn he heard the word spoken in the guitarist’s nearly inaudible voice.
He obliged the request, thrusting into the sweet spot harder, watching as hide squirmed in pleasure under him, breath coming out in short gasps. He removed his fingers as hide’s eyes opened to regard him. He pressed himself against the other’s entrance, watching hide tense up a little, and he entered him slowly. He paused when he was all the way inside and the guitartist’s legs wrapped around him. “Move.” The single word left hide’s voice as he watched Yoshiki with heavy lidded eyes.
The drummer let out a little growl and moved back until he was barely inside the other man, thrusting back into him almost agonizingly slow, receiving a groan from hide as he hit his prostate. The guitarist tightened his legs around the other man, silently urging him to move faster. Yoshiki picked up the pace, letting out his own groan as he could feel the other’s inner muscles tighten around him. He increased his pace, thrusting into hide’s sweet spot almost relentlessly, reaching down to stroke at the other’s cock, in time to the thrusts. He felt the other’s muscles tighten as he convulsed around him and hide came violently into his hand. With a few more thrusts Yoshiki found himself over the edge, coming inside hide not long after.
Yoshiki leaned up to leave a kiss on hide’s lips before pulling out slowly, laying down beside hide, drawing the shorter into his arms. “Ya know, all you had to do was ask.” he swatted at hide for the comment, closing his eyes.
*******************
...and my erasure:
When blindly reaching for each other, they suddenly remembered the unbearable lightness of being...
One thing was certain: the moment.
A gesture.
Moving. Swaying. Gripping the edge of the wood shelf.
The slightest bit of skin.
A gasp...
(...slipping out of other's hands as soon as they loosened...)
He didn't have any intention to stop.
He looked back,
(...trailing his fingers slowly over the rough fabric of his chest...)
reaching his hand to move over his lips,
(...trying not to leave any really visible marks...)
grasping at air as well.
Chin.
Neck.
Hips.
Breath.
His lips brushing against the others, reaching down...
A small moan...
(...once more...)
Watching.
Caress some of skin.
Receiving a gasp from the other.
(...there is no question there is some connection...)
Leaning close so their lips were almost touching before moving away teasingly.
The pleasure.
A little laugh.
A whimpered moan: "Please."
A rough kiss.
Thrusting back, urging him to move faster.
(...More...)
...
A/N: Okay: now I feel embarrassed quite a lot. But in a funny and somehow nice way. After reading all your beautiful entries... look what I've written. Erotic stuff. Although I intentionally didn't plan to. I guess the original story is to blame.
But I had fun. And I hope you had at least some, too.
And yes: I've cheated a bit when using (...More...) a few paragraphs later. I hope it's allowed. Anyway...it was my first time "erasing" someone's fic and it was a lot of fun. I'll be glad of joining next time.