More Momoryo (My New OTP) :)

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Ooh, a two week draught has hit me, but I'm back once again with a little ficlet.
Ah...PoT, how I love you so...especially your abbreviation

Title: Juxtaposition
Summary: Ryoma doesn't like to compare, because comparision usually leads to disappointment.
Rating: G
Pairing: Ryoma-centric. Mentions of Momo.
Warning: Slight angst, and a corpulent amount of

Comments

[aman_amarth]

awww that was a cute ending.

[kireny]

Usually I just lurk and dont comment-im too shy-but that was really great. I loved it. I loved the feeling in it and I could see it happening-as much as I would hate that.

I never did like that he went back to America just like that; it seemed so odd that was how it ended-like it begin so i guess it makes some sense but after the whole series it seemed like a let down.

It was really good. I love Momo/Ryoma (my first POT OTP and it still is) and I really liked this.

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Don't be shy! Everyone I've met on LJ are all really friendly.
I'm glad you enjoyed reading. If I made someone smile a bit with my writing, then it's worth it.

Yeah...I think Konomi was probably aiming for one those literary endings, where nothing is "happily ever after". Though, I really did wish Ryoma stayed in Japan.
Ah well.

[anonymous]

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Lol.
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Yargh. I know me and tenses. I can't figure them out, if someone could explain them to me, like they teach us in French or something...

By the way, about the commas, that's a huge debate apparently between Grammar Nazis. Whether or not to use a comma in front of and. Sometimes I do it...sometimes I don't.

[edbreadkid11]

yeah, i remember talking about commas in class once, there was a heated debate.
if you want i could go over them with you, i mean its not that hard. and if youre really having trouble you should talk with the cohen, she knows best.

[edbreadkid11]

you know what i have an idea.
print out one of your stories that you like and we could go over them and i can super-edit it. you know, get in there with the tenses and grammar and punctuation and spelling and all that nasty english stuff.
YEAH RED PEN TIEEEMMMM!!!