[fanfic] APH: "In Water" Part 2--UKUS (sequel to "the daphnes burn")
Title: In Water
By: Eram_Quod_Es
Ratings/Warnings: Rated M…for MUSTACHE! There is disturbing content in this fanfiction, including themes of torture, suicide, and molestation. If that makes you weak in the knees, GET THE FUCK OUT. This is UKUS, with an optional hint of RussiaxAmerica at the end.
Summary: [Sequel to "The Daphnes ( Read more... )
By: Eram_Quod_Es
Ratings/Warnings: Rated M…for MUSTACHE! There is disturbing content in this fanfiction, including themes of torture, suicide, and molestation. If that makes you weak in the knees, GET THE FUCK OUT. This is UKUS, with an optional hint of RussiaxAmerica at the end.
Summary: [Sequel to "The Daphnes ( Read more... )
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It shall commence.
Fyi, you are basically the best author ever when it comes to writing imagery. Every little detail you put absolutely floors me. Like when you mention how Alfred's lost the tok to his tik. It's a great bit that some doofus like me could never think of in a million years. It's like you see the word differently, and it leads to such awesome writing.
The part where Alfred can't tell which Arthur is worse is, oh man, just. . . damn you! You and your talent. How dare you have so much.Oh, these two, so messed up and adorable all at once and making me questions what the heck is wrong with me. That's another thing I love about your writing. It's deep and lovely and makes reflect and reread so much of it, just to make sure I haven't missed a bunch of the fantastic subtle little things you write in ( ... )
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MSN can add YIM folks. My YIM name is charlemagnett (charlemagnet was already taken /sob), and I use it a lot more often than MSN.
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Ha ha that is kind of a creepy compliment I am sorry.
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Y'know, just saying. I Would not want to have this on my mind all day, while working. It tends to make me....look at people, in certain ways. And you, who handles food. ........scary ( ... )
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Sorry for the late reply, and the insubstantial-ness of it. ><
Boo, I wish Russia would save our Alfie....
.........but ambiguous endings are awesome, too, right? :D
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I just read this whole series (well, you know, as whole as it is so far) and I'm just--wow. So creepy, my stomach is seriously in knots from reading this, the way you've written this is so powerful. The way you describe the deterioration of Arthur's mental state, right alongside Alfred's growing awareness is so compelling.
Why is everything you write so amazing?
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I honestly didn't know how creepy it sounded because, though it kinda gave me creep-vibes to write it, I am sort of a wimpwimpWIMP. Did you know that the absolute most creepy part for me was coming up with that one string of sentences with "England" in the cabinet? One of my number one fears. >< Finding Arthur in the cabinet. Seriously, finding something behind a cabinet door that's totally creepy and you wouldn't expect, as well as getting pulled into a dark, tiny space. *shiver*
......it probably would have been even creepier if I *had* made Alfred go into the cabinet, or behind the toilet. >> But it's also pretty creepy to see something not unlike an unpleasant, The Grudge-esque body stuck at the bottom of your bathtub. The bathtub that you were about to molest your victim in.
I'm done now. ;-; Gonna go....hide.
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It's fantastic.
Arthur and his creepy ways are portrayed very nicely in this story. But I feel pity for Alfred. He's been locked up with Arthur for so long and he doesn't even know it even if he does! And he'll never escape to reality!
Anyway, your writing style is just...I-I can't seem to think of the right word. ...Ah, that's it! Your writing style is so -blank space- that it's too good for words!
This story is going in my top 5 best fan-fiction list. The storyline...the way every sentence is like a distinct detail in a gorgeous painting...and, of course, the beauty of UKUS come together to form this -so outstanding that I can't believe it really exists- awesome story that just grips you from the beginning and keeps holding you even after it's finished. But is it really done? All great stories, even fanfics, are never finished- they keep moving on and linger, and circle around the reader.
Does that make sense? I apologize if it doesn't.
And so, overall, I love you. I love you so much.
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I think I love you. ;-;
Anyways, besides that bucket of creepiness, yes, of course you can. I've thought about an ending, sorta, though I think the less I touch it, the better. XD Maybe someday, after I've gotten a bit further into TDDOL and A Perished Sun, I'll think of maybe failing at writing the last part, but for now it's sort of left hanging. So of course you can request something on the kink meme. XD I'd love to see someone else's take on it.
Glad you enjoyed the story, though. :)
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I would try to but I'm not so good at writing and you are so it be embarrassing . / / /.
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And I'm sure you're not bad at writing. :) I don't consider myself that great at writing, so it's always a surprise to see others saying that I'm 'good.' Makes me feel funny. :/
But yuss, go and do as you please. Requesting on the kink meme is always an option, or filling in the blanks yourself. XD
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