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Torchwood - Muscle Memory

Mar 05, 2009 13:42

Title: Muscle Memory
Author: smirnoffmule
Pairing: Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa
Rating: R
Summary: Ianto comes to terms with loss, while he and Jack come to terms with each other.

A/N: Huge love and thanks for betaing, cheerleading, and general heroics to valderys, lawsontl, lefaym and missdeanna

This piece functions as a sequel of sorts to Pavlov's Bell, but also serves as a stand alone ( Read more... )

fandom: torchwood

Comments 56

MORE! please MORE! redangelteflon March 5 2009, 19:03:48 UTC

it feels like this story isn't over yet.

so please please write more!

thank you!

Re: MORE! please MORE! smirnoffmule March 6 2009, 14:10:53 UTC

Well, I'm glad you liked what there is, anyway! Thanks.

hab318princess March 5 2009, 21:11:01 UTC

lovely fic, great journey for Ianto

smirnoffmule March 6 2009, 14:11:06 UTC

Thank you!

used_songs March 5 2009, 22:58:13 UTC

This is wonderful and I absolutely love the way it ends.

smirnoffmule March 6 2009, 14:06:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad it worked for you.

fide_et_spe March 5 2009, 23:06:11 UTC

This is lovely, and while it stands well on it's own, it would make a great start for a longer piece. You really left me wanting to know about the next day! I like your patient Jack, and they were both very in character.

smirnoffmule March 6 2009, 14:15:14 UTC

Thank you. Love the icon, btw.

valderys March 5 2009, 23:15:04 UTC

Can I say again, how much I enjoyed this piece? I still think it feels to me like the best sort of one-act plays - rich, and claustrophobic, and intense. A bit like 'Midnight' even. Jack and Ianto bounce off one another so perfectly, are glib, and heart-breaking by turns - it could make me weep :)

smirnoffmule March 6 2009, 14:11:58 UTC

Love, you can say that as many times as you like :P Seriously though, I'm really glad you liked it - your good opinion means a great deal to me, and I really appreciate your help with it, too.