Fic: Numb3rs, Don/Charlie, NC-17

Apr 27, 2009 22:20

Title: Elixir, Part 2
Author: starlettmalfoy
Pairing/Characters: Don/Charlie
Rating: NC-17
Warning: PWP, incest, smut galore.
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 954
Summary: Don doesn't always listen to Charlie and this time he pays the price. Follows Elixir Part 1.
Disclaimer: Author doesn't own the show or the characters and isn't making any profit.
Author's Note ( Read more... )

[f] numb3rs, fic, [w] incest, [r] nc17, [p] don/charlie, slash

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Comments 14

windeetree April 28 2009, 03:37:21 UTC
Holy Hell this is hot.

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starlettmalfoy April 28 2009, 03:53:47 UTC
Hee! Why thank you! I'm glad you agree. I rather thought so myself, which was interesting, because I rarely like the smut that I churn out. Lol.

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this part. <3

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devon99 April 28 2009, 19:45:23 UTC
Hee, so glad to see another part to this story:)

My stomach would do a little flip too if Charlie was looking at me like that!! Don stands no chance, with or without the Elixir!!

And the only way to get through it is, 'lots of sex'
Hee, Charlie really is a genius.

Loved it sweetie

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starlettmalfoy April 28 2009, 21:49:39 UTC
^.^ Yay! \o/ I'm so glad you're enjoying it! It seriously makes my day to come home from work and see a comment like this one.

:D Hopefully, the third won't disappoint. I have a feeling it won't, though. ::winks::

::giant hug:: Thanks, lovely!

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jayceepat April 28 2009, 21:38:18 UTC
"combining a few household ingredients, plus our secret chemical compound, we were able to produce something that has a very interesting effect on the consumer"

Can't you just see Charlie saying this? All pleased and excited because a theory became fact? And you know his poor brother is his favorite experimental subject. I'm going to be patient until we get the last part where I'm sure Charlie is going to 'cure' Don or at least relieve his physical symptoms. Like hell, I'm going to be patient. I'm going to be waiting for part 3 with anticipation.

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starlettmalfoy April 28 2009, 21:50:56 UTC
HEE! That's one of my favorite lines as well! I'm slowly getting used to writing Charlie-speak. :D

I'm sosuperglad you like this. You have no idea! I will definitely hurry up in trying to resolve this story for you all. As soon as I get the ending hashed out...

Just hold on for a little while longer! <3

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rubynye April 29 2009, 18:48:11 UTC
Be still my pounding heart! I have been WAITING for the continuation of this tale, and it's everything I envisioned and more!

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starlettmalfoy April 29 2009, 22:04:58 UTC
::grins:: Why thank you, dearie! I'll try to get the final part out quickly! <3 I'm glad you liked it! :D

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lukinha_jesus May 1 2009, 16:28:59 UTC
GRRRRRRR!!! When does the next part come out? :: stares at you hot and bothered :: I wanna read it, I wanna read it, I wanna-! Ok, you got it, right.

This is sort of embarrassing, but by tasting a bit of my 'own poison', I sort of....throbbed Now gimme more!

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starlettmalfoy May 1 2009, 18:02:50 UTC
Luciana, you crack me UP, girl! This is the best comment ever. Seriously.

Throbbed is going to be our new inside joke, isn't it? Dare I say it... violently?! LOL.

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