Comments | eponineundone: Fic: The Truth About Cooties (Heroes, Nathan/Peter)

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Fic: The Truth About Cooties (Heroes, Nathan/Peter)

Oct 02, 2007 18:00

Title: The Truth About Cooties

Author: EponineUndone

Warnings: incest, male/male love, craziness, sap and angst in turns... and rereading this, I must insist the sap is slightly alarming, since I started this more with the intention of a romantic comedy type feel. Be warned. Oh, also I took great liberties with Peter's powers. Oh, well.

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slash, heroes, fic, nathan/peter

Comments 30

niccy07 October 3 2007, 19:10:57 UTC

Peter may always have been the one who breached the distance between them, but it was Nathan who had the hardest time letting go.

That was my absolute favorite line! This was really sweet!

eponineundone October 3 2007, 19:25:15 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully it wasn't TOO sweet... I have a bad history of overdosing my readers with syrupy sap, lol.
Thanks for the feedback!

niccy07 October 3 2007, 19:37:55 UTC

Trust me, it wasn't to sweet! ^_^ Just perfect!

dragonydreams October 4 2007, 19:59:24 UTC

Absolutely incredible.

eponineundone October 4 2007, 20:11:13 UTC

Hehe, thanks.

meli_64 October 5 2007, 05:09:26 UTC

Brilliant! :)

eponineundone October 5 2007, 05:22:25 UTC

Glad you liked it!

eryslash October 20 2007, 12:19:28 UTC

Oh, damn, the ending is so sweet and so right and it makes me wanna cry.

Peter may always have been the one who breached the distance between them, but it was Nathan who had the hardest time letting go.

This line is just sooo perfect. It makes this fic worth meming. Wonderful.

eponineundone October 20 2007, 22:54:26 UTC

Awww, thanks! I always love feedback, especially when it's positive =P
Glad you liked it!

loveatdusk December 13 2007, 04:15:00 UTC

Okay, so now I am dangerously dehydrated from all of the tears you just made me cry. Seriously.

But this was so, so good. I loved it.

I don't think I'll ever be able to hear the word "cootie" again without wanting to cry. <3

eponineundone December 16 2007, 09:57:44 UTC

Somehow the picture of someone bursting into hysterical tears every time the word "cootie" is used makes me laugh and laugh. I know, not the compassionate response, but my first reaction to your comment.
My second reaction: It makes me very, very happy that you liked it, and it touched you so much. It's always a good feeling when one's work accomplishes what you set out to do when starting it. Thanks again for the feedback!

loveatdusk December 16 2007, 20:22:14 UTC

No problem at all, it was great work.

"Cootie." *sobs*

Lol, I'm pathetic...