Comments | eponine119: FNL fic: Dodgeball [Julie, Tim, PG, 675 words]

eponine119

FNL fic: Dodgeball [Julie, Tim, PG, 675 words]

Aug 26, 2008 20:55

Notes: Not mine. Too bad.
Summary: Julie's least favorite game in gym class. Ever.
Rated PG, 675 words.

Dodgeball
by eponine119
August 26, 2008

( It's not like she didn't have any friends. Just…none in this class. )

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Comments 6

mel_b_angel August 27 2008, 05:05:45 UTC

something uneven in her chest went flippity-flop

Oh Tim Riggins'll do that to you missy.

Nice work!

eponine119 August 27 2008, 17:24:38 UTC

He sure will!

Thanks for reading this.

cmonkatiekatie August 27 2008, 06:47:26 UTC

Oh Megan, I LOVE this. Way to make dodgeball slightly less evil!

also, I concur, flippity-flop is possibly my new favorite word.

eponine119 August 27 2008, 17:25:12 UTC

Thanks! Always happy to provide a new favorite word. ;) dodgeball is still evil though.

alliecat8 August 27 2008, 22:38:52 UTC

Oh, FNL fic, YAY!!!!!

And spot-on Julie POV. (HA, I typed POW - which is exactly what gym class always felt like for me, and I suspect, for Julie, too - trapped in an awful hurty place you can't escape.) But then I think she *almost* had fun after Tim lobbed the ball at her. ;) Tami is wise as always, seeing that it's just another way of pigtail-pulling; of course Tim was flirting! And deep down Julie likes it. Heh, so would I, baby. See icon. :)

Great job, thank you for posting this!!!

eponine119 August 27 2008, 23:54:34 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this, especially the POV. That makes me really happy.

Oh, if she'd had fun after Tim threw the ball, that would have been perfect. I wish I'd thought of it.