Lost fic: The Yellow Brick Road Always Ends in Pain

[eponine119]

Disclaimer: Lost is not mine.
Notes: Using for fanfic100 #47, Heart. Spoilers through season 3.
Summary: Reflections on Sawyer, Kate, and Jack.

The Yellow Brick Road Always Leads to Pain
by eponine119
February 23, 2008

Comments

[quiet_rebel]

Oh. Ouch. First of all, that title. Angsty!

And I loved the character study in all three parts, but Sawyer's was perfect. I loved how you went back to the heart thing and how it translates to his actions now.

And every time I see someone use that icon, I get shivers. When the triangle is done right, it's just right.

[eponine119]

Thank you! I'm kind of addicted to the triangle, when it's done right. I'm glad you thought it was here.

[elliotsmelliot]

What a killer opening line. I didn't think you could top Sawyer's section but it was Jack's that slayed me in the end. This was really great!

[eponine119]

Thank you! I started with the Sawyer piece and felt like it was the strongest, so it means a lot to me that the Jack section really got to you.

[gottalovev]

great observations the 3 of them... running away and shutting off, what a powerful theme for them all.

[eponine119]

Thank you! They do all have elements of that in common, don't they?

[bluelittlegirl]

You captured them beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
I have not yet read your last two, but I will. I can't wait!

[eponine119]

Thank you for reading, and for sending people my way! :)

[alemyrddin]

oh, poor Jack *tells him it's okay*
and I loved the last line of Sawyer's part as well.
Great character study.

[eponine119]

Thank you so much!