Comments | eponine119: Lost fic: Pretend [Jack/Sawyer, NC17, AU]

eponine119

Lost fic: Pretend [Jack/Sawyer, NC17, AU]

Jan 20, 2008 19:52

A tiny break from the Titanic
Disclaimer: Not mine
Notes: Continuation of the AU series where Sawyer is a country star. Jack/Sawyer, NC17. 1150 words.
Using for fanfic100 #95, New Year

Pretend
by eponine119
January 19-20, 2008

( Jack had never seen the point of celebrating New Year's in LA. All the excitement was in New York, three hours ago. )

[lost_fanfic]-jack/sawyer, [lost_fanfic]-all, [lost_fanfic]-fanfic100

Comments 22

halfdutch January 21 2008, 04:06:55 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad to see more of this series! :) Whetted my appetite for more!

eponine119 January 22 2008, 02:55:35 UTC

Thank you! I'm hoping there will be more, sometime!

elise_509 January 21 2008, 05:27:05 UTC

Woo-hoo! Girl, you spoil us with the AUs, you know that? Taking a break from the fabulous Titanic AU to hit us with this delightful and delightfully hot piece. I love Jack wanting Sawyer despite himself, the angst of missing him but not really wanting to feel that way, that jealousy he feels wondering what Sawyer is doing and who with...all so great. :) As always, can't wait for more! *greedy grabby hands*

eponine119 January 22 2008, 02:56:34 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this! And if you feel spoiled with the AUs, so much the better! :)

cynthia_arrow January 21 2008, 06:25:55 UTC

I've never read the series, so maybe I'm not the best one to comment here, but I thought this stood pretty well on its own. It was complex, especially the mix of emotions going through Jack. It was sad and it felt real--slighty but interestingly different from the dynamic I'm used to seeing with them, but in character. Especially that ending. *sigh*

[I haven't forgotten the Titanic story, btw. I'm waiting for some time in the next couple of days to sit down and read the last few bits.]

eponine119 January 22 2008, 02:57:23 UTC

I'm glad you said that, because I wondered if this story would stand alone or not.

No worries on reading the Titanic story, either. It's so long!

jenthegypsy January 21 2008, 13:02:29 UTC

Just wanted to say that I'm woefully erratic in my reading these days - I need to back up and reread this series and also to begin your Titanic series, which I cannot begin to tell you why I haven't read yet. *iz saaaad* I'm a bad friend... :(

eponine119 January 22 2008, 02:58:25 UTC

No worries! I know the Titanic story is long, and different people have different reading availability. I haven't been doing too well with reading lately, either, but I'm trying to get back in the swing of things.

alemyrddin January 21 2008, 14:09:55 UTC

oh how I love this 'verse!
This was sad, but hopeful too.
And I loved how Sawyer using Jack's name instead of a nickname made what he said sound more heartfelt.
also, Sawyer writing a song for Jack made me aww - I know it's what he does for a living, but it's just so sweet.
:)

eponine119 January 22 2008, 02:59:19 UTC

Thank you! I like what you say about Sawyer writing the song for Jack -- it's very much what I was thinking, like this should be a huge deal, and yet in the story it's not quite. I'm not explaining myself very well...thanks for reading this!