Comments | eponine119: Lost fic: Driven [Jack/Kate/Sawyer]

eponine119

Lost fic: Driven [Jack/Kate/Sawyer]

Mar 21, 2006 19:55

Disclaimer: Lost isn't mine.
Summary: They were united in their quest, no matter how much they hated each other. They were going to find her. Jack/Kate/Sawyer, post-island. Rated R.
Author's notes: Written for psych_30 #10, Approach-Avoidance and fanfic100 #66, Rain. Mildly inspired by Kentucky Rain

Driven
by eponine119
March 20, 2006

( ''I have to find her,'' Jack said. ''You have to help.'' And Sawyer knew she'd gotten to him, too. )

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Comments 35

quiet_rebel March 22 2006, 04:18:05 UTC

I'm in love. *spins*

I so want you to make this until a series. Jack and Sawyer on the road looking for Kate.

How you wrote Kate is true to her character even though in my fangirl opinion says she would pick Sawyer ;) but I'll take the trio too. I like how you mentioned she told Sawyer she loved him, but she told Jack her crime. It makes you wonder which is more important--and maybe who is more important.

Can't wait to read more!

eponine119 March 22 2006, 06:24:53 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. Jack and Sawyer on the road would be fun, wouldn't it?

But mostly I'm thrilled about what you mentioned in your comment about Kate, and how she told the different men different things, because that was absolutely what I was going for in this story but I wasn't quite sure if it came through.

zenana7 March 22 2006, 06:21:37 UTC

Well done, well crafted, gripping, angsty. You really captured the S-K-J dynamic. And killer last line. That's what it's all about.

eponine119 March 22 2006, 06:25:31 UTC

Thank you so much!

And it really is all about having a killer last line, isn't it? :)

sapphire_child March 22 2006, 06:38:13 UTC

You are the ultimate writer of these three characters. Perfect.

eponine119 March 23 2006, 02:42:55 UTC

Thank you! What a nice thing to say. :)

sapphire_child March 23 2006, 05:04:36 UTC

Well I don't often read much out of the Charlie/Claire circle because that's my OTP but I really loved this - it was just perfectly worded, perfectly characterised...just wow.

elise_509 March 22 2006, 08:45:35 UTC

Sawyer wondered who it was Jack thought Kate had chosen. If he was resigned because he thought it was Sawyer, or if he was determined because he thought it was himself. Sawyer knew better. Kate's choice was not to choose. It always had been. That's why she had left them both.

what perfect lines. what a perfect fic, actually. :)

eponine119 March 23 2006, 02:43:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

inthekeyofd March 22 2006, 13:52:25 UTC

Just perfection as always! You hit a perfect balance of angst, any more and it would have been too dark, and less and it wouldn't have packed the same punch, I love both your Sawyer and your Jack voices, but damn, you write Sawyer so well!!!

Wonderful!

eponine119 March 23 2006, 02:44:37 UTC

Thank you so much! It's funny in a way, I'm having trouble writing Jack now...too much time writing Sawyer. So I'm glad you think I do it well.