Lost fic: Jack Hates [adult, slash, J/K, J/S, S/K]

Jun 06, 2005 17:37

See, today it doesn't seem dark or twisted enough. My own fault if you're disappointed. Also, um...who broke LJ, it's being all weird.

Summary: Jack can't get over his jealousy. Set post-island. Jack/Kate, Jack/Sawyer, implied Sawyer/Kate

''What was it like, with him?'' Jack can't quite catch his breath. He's asked this question before. )

[lost_fanfic]-jack/sawyer, [lost_fanfic]-slash, [lost_fanfic]-all

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halfdutch June 7 2005, 00:53:21 UTC
(sniffling) Your fics always hit the trigger point that makes me cry - everyone's so wrapped up in denial and pride and it kills me. AUGH. I absolutely loved this.

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foxxcub June 7 2005, 01:38:49 UTC
And....yes. I'm dead.

*thud*

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mysticxf June 7 2005, 02:19:37 UTC
If this got any darker, I wouldn't be able to see it. And twisted!? My mouth is hanging open. But amazing, the definition of angsty if there ever was one, and just wow. *dies of shock*

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kho June 7 2005, 06:19:15 UTC
Noooooooooo, Jack. No. Don't become your father!!! Though, I guess he sort of already has at this point in the fic.

This was so sad. I gotta say, I wanted more sex with Sawyer, but what was there was hot.

I esp liked:
Sawyer's not pretending or demonstrating anymore; this is him and Jack now. No one else is in the room with them, least of all Kate.

and

He hates Sawyer as the first drops burn their way down his throat. He hates Sawyer as his eyes slip closed and he tips his head back to coax every last bit from the glass. He hates the way Sawyer looks at him over the bottle as he pours a refill. He hates Sawyer and that's why he drinks.

Soooo painful.

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eponine119 June 7 2005, 22:03:16 UTC
Yeah, it is kind of too late for Jack in this story. But that's what works so well on the show -- Jack's got what seems to be a load of self-hatred, but he's absolutely nothing like the man his father was.

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spicy_zanella June 7 2005, 06:57:30 UTC
wow...so dark...but i loved it!

Sawyer tastes like life and sex and danger

mmmmmm...my favorite flavor!

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