Comments | eponine119: something different

eponine119

something different

May 20, 2005 21:21

I kind of accidentally wrote a slash story. About Jack and Sawyer. Inspired by a line in a story by khohen1. Oops?

( read it )

[lost_fanfic]-jack/sawyer, [lost_fanfic]-slash, [lost_fanfic]-all

Comments 21

kho May 21 2005, 05:53:44 UTC

Definately no oops. Dude. That was sooooooooooo fuckin' hot! Hot, and visual, and angsty, and *them*, and guh. And this isn't normal for you, is it? The slash I mean. Cause, dude, you did it some damn good justice. I've been writing slash, nearly exclusively, for 4 years, and I SUCK at the sex. LOL. I'm good at kissing, and dialogue, but when it comes to the actual sex? Nope. This is just so. Damn. Good.

Yay! An offhanded, throwaway line produces this! I shall hope for many more to come!

And?

"Butterfly," Sawyer says, and it's a beautiful word with that drawl of his.

Sigh. I bet it is. Awww. Sawyer sayin' butterfly. Loved that line.

eponine119 May 22 2005, 01:52:00 UTC

Hey, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Because yeah, I don't usually do the slash. Flirty kind of slash, sure, but actual slash? This is the first one. So it's good that it worked.

dejectedmadness May 21 2005, 15:44:56 UTC

Oh man, that WAS hot! I've said to like 5 people khohen1 recced in the last couple days, including you, now, that I don't even watch Lost. But honestly, I loved this. Very Very Very good. I'm starting to wonder where I can get my hands on a few episodes. Stupid no tv. Awesome again! *thumbs up*

kho May 21 2005, 16:46:55 UTC

Well if you have a DSL/Cable connection, I'd rec lost_eps. I use the wmv versions, cause they're 170mb's instead of the avi which is 350mb's. And hell, even if you don't have a cable/dsl connection, maybe it's worth the wait. Though, not for me. I'm too impatient. LOL.

dejectedmadness May 21 2005, 16:48:07 UTC

Oh man, you are the goddess of cool. I'm going there right now.

eponine119 May 22 2005, 01:52:50 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, even if you don't watch Lost. (You should!) :)

foxxcub May 21 2005, 18:01:26 UTC

Oh. My God. *reads again*

Hon. I cannot say enough about this. This is my favorite fic by you EVER, hands down. Goodness. The want and the confusion and that last paragraph--GUH. It's all just so completely THEM. There are so many lines here that I adore (esp. Jack's fascination with Sawyer's hair, god). You should do smut more often, my dear, especially if it yields fic like this.

In other words, I loved it :)

eponine119 May 22 2005, 01:54:03 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it and you thought it worked, because this is the kind of story you're so good at writing.

foxxcub May 22 2005, 03:02:36 UTC

Aw, thank you so much, you're so sweet ;) But seriously, I wouldn't mind AT ALL if you did slash more often!

halfdutch May 21 2005, 19:17:24 UTC

OMFG! You finally wrote smut! And it's FANTASTIC! Sooo hot and just GUH. Welcome to the dark side, girl! (hands you shiny smut badge)

This is truly, truly amazing. You're like Jack in your fic here: resisting the smut, but when it happens, WOW!

Thank you for writing. Lovely, hot descriptions and dead-on characterizations. Although of course I'm sad that Jack can't ever repay Sawyer. :-( C'mon, fic can find a way!

eponine119 May 22 2005, 01:55:38 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm thrilled you liked it. I kinda like it here on the dark side. :) Maybe I'll give it another shot sometime.

Whoa... lillyjk May 21 2005, 20:19:44 UTC

Smutty, angsty and beautiful - that's a hard combination to pull off, and you did it in a big way. This is your first slash??? Oh my god, you must write more and post ASAP.

Re: Whoa... eponine119 May 22 2005, 01:57:10 UTC

Thanks so much! Yeah, first slash story. We'll see if inspiration strikes again.