Fic: Start Small and Build (The First Rule of Good Drama), NC-17, Team

[epithetta]

Title: Start Small and Build (The First Rule of Good Drama)
Characters: Team--all
Rating: NC-17 for sexxors
Wordcount: 994
Author's Notes: Written utilising the whoverse_las prompt 1.5, Trust Issues. Section headers from Nickel Creek's "Somebody More Like You", for which apparently I am over-fond to the point of maudlinism.

Comments

[51stcenturyfox]

HOLY WOW.

The ending, with Suzie's last thought, is awesome.

But this is all awesome. The salad cream!

And you got "donkey punch" into a story. LOL.

[epithetta]

You know me, I love the donkey punch.

[neifile7]

Nothing has two syllables, and so does the thing lodged in Toshiko's gut.

SHITBEARS.

How do you do this? You should take out a patent.

[epithetta]

HAAAHAHAHAH I DON'T KNOW.