Fic: Indemnity (Jack/Ianto, R)

[epithetta]

Title: Indemnity
Characters: Jack/Ianto
Rating: R
Wordcount: 2010
Author's Notes: Written utilising the writerinadrawer prompt 4.10- "Trains, Planes and Automobiles" (Someone/s is stuck in transit. Other transportation devices [i.e., boats, spaceships] are okay.). Added Element: a historical figure. Whew! WIAD IS OVER. It's been real, people.
Summary: Jack

Comments

[aviv_b]

Don't tell, but I liked this story a lot more than any of the three finalist stories.

[epithetta]

LOL awwwwwww.

[badly_knitted]

Oh, poor Jack, he took too long to realise Ianto was really there! To finally understand where he was just as Ianto was leaving, what a bitter blow!

[epithetta]

Thanks for reading! :D

[behindblue_eyes]

Oh wow, this was great. Good job!

[epithetta]

Thank you so very much!

[lone_star_woman]

Ouch. Still, it's beautiful, and I liked Ianto's assurance that they'd see each other again.

[epithetta]

Aw, yeah, you know, maybe he'll take another train.

Thanks for reading.

[heddychaa]

OH MY GOD.

What have you done.

What have you dooooooooooooooone.

As soon as I realized what was happening I was like "no no no no no no" and then Ianto got on the train and everything was cut short and there was NO CATHARSIS AT ALL. And then I cried, and I never fucking cry at fanfics.

:(

(This was fucking fantastic. Seriously fantastic. You used just the right amount of repetition to throw it off kilter. It felt strange and yet familiar the whole time.)

[epithetta]

AWWWWW, I DONE MADE YOU CRY.

MY JOB HERE IS DONE. :P

THANKS.