Title: Glass Houses
Authors:
itsplashes and
kayjaylovesPairings: Yunjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst/romance
Word Count: 3215 words (oneshot)
Summary: Yunho wonders when it started. A dream within a dream within a dream.
A/N: Dedicated to our wonderful betas
under_an_oak,
miyamoto, and
gumi. Thanks for putting up with us. <3 With an honorable mention for
tvxqluvv. Because she's that awesome.
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It started when they were sixteen.Yunho was a boy, just a boy, with sharp eyes and long limbs. He looked confident, chin held high, movements fluid, and Jaejoong wondered, fleetingly - carefully, what he would look like if he stumbled and fell. )
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Wonderful writing, but my Lord, how painful can you get?
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/hands you some fluff for the pain
thank you bb ♥ for comment and reading
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Can I friend you?
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of course, bb <3
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the contrast between their younger days and present is so blatantly heartbreaking. i mean, comparing all their relationships then, the shovingicecreamintoface and playinginthefountain to the almostemptydinnertable. gosh it just hurts real bad.
i really like the dinner scene. especially the repitition of the starting lines at the end. and damn it hits you right in the face when you see only jaejoong and changmin sitting down at the dinner table, after what jaejoong had said about 'we' not wanting changmin's ass where the food goes. it's heartwrenching to see what 'we' here comprises of- no longer the 5-together.
love all their characterizations here but somehow changmin tore my heart. his third person point of view reflects even greater insights to this whole issue. and his analytical nature is resulted 'because ( ... )
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We're glad that each of one them sort of spoke to you and yeah, that comment about Changmin. <3 We wanted that feeling of something that passed to come across.
this is really impactful and the ending is just asjkdfgh. still i harbour some hope cause it ain't finished yet.
You get endings so well. XD
I hope you're feeling okay now. D:
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♥ ♥ ♥
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thanks for sharing..^^
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Thanks for reading and commenting, bb. <3
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and i thought i'd be happy today?
how could you...!!! ***WHAILING!!!*** TT_______________TT
i'm friending you because you have to write more & i wanna read them!
okay?
hmmm... Bebe you're good, ne?
omedetto! ^____^
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we thank you for the lovely comment, dear! ♥ for reading!
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