[fic] Glass Houses (PG-13) Yunjae

[itsplashes]

Title: Glass Houses
Authors: itsplashes and kayjayloves
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst/romance
Word Count: 3215 words (oneshot)
Summary: Yunho wonders when it started. A dream within a dream within a dream.
A/N: Dedicated to our wonderful betas under_an_oak, miyamoto, and gumi. Thanks for putting up with us. <3 With an honorable mention for tvxqluvv. Because she's that awesome.

Comments

[shinchul303]

So depressing. Absolute antithesis of the glory days. The Changmin/Jae dinner scene......was very powerful.

Wonderful writing, but my Lord, how painful can you get?

[kayjayloves]

CAN I QUOTE YOU ON THAT? antithesis of the glory days...

/hands you some fluff for the pain

thank you bb ♥ for comment and reading

[shinchul303]

"CAN I QUOTE YOU ON THAT? antithesis of the glory days..."

Can I friend you?

[kayjayloves]

/diies.

of course, bb <3

[harkk]

oh god. i'm actually crying, like real tears streaming down my cheeks. oh god oh god this is the first time i've actually cried this much after reading a fic. and the thing is, i don't even know why it affected me so much.

the contrast between their younger days and present is so blatantly heartbreaking. i mean, comparing all their relationships then, the shovingicecreamintoface and playinginthefountain to the almostemptydinnertable. gosh it just hurts real bad.

i really like the dinner scene. especially the repitition of the starting lines at the end. and damn it hits you right in the face when you see only jaejoong and changmin sitting down at the dinner table, after what jaejoong had said about 'we' not wanting changmin's ass where the food goes. it's heartwrenching to see what 'we' here comprises of- no longer the 5-together.

love all their characterizations here but somehow changmin tore my heart. his third person point of view reflects even greater insights to this whole issue. and his analytical nature is resulted 'because

[itsplashes]

Bb, your comment makes both of us really happy and giddy. XD Thank you so much. We really appreciate this.

We're glad that each of one them sort of spoke to you and yeah, that comment about Changmin. <3 We wanted that feeling of something that passed to come across.

this is really impactful and the ending is just asjkdfgh. still i harbour some hope cause it ain't finished yet.
You get endings so well. XD

I hope you're feeling okay now. D:

[oldwillow_brook]

Will be back when Jaeho heart decides to form once again. It's kind of broken at the bottom of my stomach, and these freaking tears just won't stop. So be back later.

[kayjayloves]

/scotch tapes jaeho heart back together and hands to you

♥ ♥ ♥

[rining_melody]

this is suffocated,how tense the scene at the dining table...really hope this one could turn out to be chaptered fic..he3..

thanks for sharing..^^

[itsplashes]

That suffocating feeling was part of what we were aiming for. We're pretty sure this is just going to be a oneshot, though, but we do want to write more Yunjae in the future. <3

Thanks for reading and commenting, bb. <3

[samui_sakura]

this is sooooooooooooooo painful!!!!

and i thought i'd be happy today?

how could you...!!! ***WHAILING!!!*** TT_______________TT

i'm friending you because you have to write more & i wanna read them!
okay?

hmmm... Bebe you're good, ne?
omedetto! ^____^

[kayjayloves]

/dies. somehow, i think this ended up more painful than we expected.

we thank you for the lovely comment, dear! ♥ for reading!